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| The-Fan-Who-Lived 2008-02-16 ch 13,  | abusethis was so good i havent ever read a story like this so its a really good and very different perspective lol i was thinking of the TALK scene and i could just see darry saying i was going to take you on a drive and watch the sunset...but i thought that might ruin the sunset for ya" |
| waniphil 2008-01-27 ch 8, | abusevery good and attractive! I like your fics. |
| supergirl3684 2007-10-19 ch 13, | abusevery nice! a very powerful fic!! great job!! |
| supergirl3684 2007-10-19 ch 1, | abusethat is a powerful beginning! Soda's reaction took my breath away! |
| Harrypotterfanaticgirl 2007-07-30 ch 13, | abusei luv your story! i especially like how you added your own jazz, and still stuck with the original story... CONTINUE PLZ! |
| ivy45663 2007-07-28 ch 13, | abuseAw I'm sorry to see it end. It was very good, I hope you write more soon. |
| dreamer 3097 2007-07-23 ch 13, | abusethis is good |
| Logan Parker 2007-07-23 ch 13, | abuseThis has been one of my all time favorite fan fics. I love it, and I hate to see it end. I hope you have a new story up soon. I love reading them. Logan |
| Honeydukes013 2007-07-23 ch 13, | abuseAwe, I had hoped you'd keep up with Darry's POV throughout the book. It was very good! Keep writing! |
| Logan Parker 2007-07-19 ch 12, | abuseI love every chapter of this, and I hope you keep writing it. I'll be waiting for the next update. Logan Parker |
| megan bambrick 2007-03-28 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is by far the best "outsiders" variation story i have read thus far on this site! i've been a huge outsiders and s.e. hinton fan for years so i really enjoyed. there are some grammatical errors, but with a little revision this one will be good. i've read and re-read the outsiders many times and have even written on it and the characters some too,so i can tell that the author of this story captured the spirit of darry as hinton wrote about him quite well. |
| ivy45663 2007-02-14 ch 12, | abuseAw I love Darry and Pony moments. More... |
| Laughing 2007-02-14 ch 12, | abuseHey, good chapter. Some grammar mistakes, but really good content. The talk wasn't quite as embarassing as it could be, and that was good. No need to mortify Pony. |
| xodamhsoirxo 2007-02-14 ch 12, anon. | abuseI bet Pony wants to be more like Darry than he thinks, but of course he wants to be like Soda too. Soda is gonna get himself killed, man, he's a goose. At least Dally was there, that's good... Update soon please! |
| dreamer 3097 2007-02-14 ch 12, | abusethis is good |