OMG! I totally loved this story most certianly the best Pirates of the Caribbean story o have ever read, so far.
I loved Harmony, great personality and I love, LOVE, the Will and Harm pairing. Make such a change from the Will and Lizzy ones.
Have you written any other Pirates of the Caribbean stories?
I especially want to read a sequel, can you write a sequel or have you already done one?
Love you forever if you do...
(batter eyelashes)
Pretty please...
(puppydog eyes)
With cherries and sprinkes and edible glitter and, and ...

Yeah I'm done begging.
Bye

I absolutely love this story so far! These past few chapters with Jack and Harmony make me bust out laughing! I can very easily imagine these situations...especially the wrestling and name calling...^__^

Hey ya! Oh it is so good to finally be able to read a good Will fanfiction! And even if your stories sucked (which they don't, btw) you would still be on my top list for hating Elizabeth! lol. BUt your writing's awesome, you get the facts right when they need it, and all in all you're a just a great writer, if I didn' already state the fact. Good luck and smooth sailing ot ya!

Yay, Elisabeth is gone for good and there wasn't a Sparrabeth! That makes me happy. I hate those things.

Showing Elisabeth for who she really is is the best idea on the face of this planet. She is nothing but a spoiled high-society girl and that's all she'll ever be!

Yes! Another Elisabeth hater! I say we get rid of that whore for good.

cool story. i enjoyed it very much.

loved it

true,corny but great!

wow this story was amazing...i hope elizabeth chokes! :) i love harmony...she's such an aweseome character...

all the best
cHoCoLaTe-RuM

YAY i hate elizabeth too! she broke poor william's heart...:( anyway, great job...harmony's a handful...LoL

all the best
cHoCoLaTe-RuM

THat was so awsome! I am going to start reading the sequel! I hope Elizabeth ends up with JAck!

:D The plot was good, though maybe you could have spent a little more time rescuing and a little less time kissing... It just seemed a little abrupt.

Okay... a few things:
- dunno if it's intentional in the speech, but definitely in the narration, 'glade' and 'where', I think you meant glad and were. Try to go over your work a few more times before submitting it.

- try not to use 'pissed' in the narration, cos it's very informal and takes away from the professionalism of ur work. r u sure they had that expression at that time?

- try to go into more detail with things. I mean, everyone's seen the movie, but still try to make this an individual piece and give us at least reminders of what the ppl look like. Esp. Harmony and Mr. and Mrs. Sparrow. More detail in setting, actions, clothes, etc. Just everything, really.

And yeah. It's a good plot. But the actual narration could do with some work, esp. typos.

~ Ally B.

I luved it!! *sniffs* I read chapter one of the sequel *or however you spell it!* I luved that too. One question, who is Jack going to end up with! *winks*

AW! That was so cute! I LOVED IT! Write another! Write another!!