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| Taeniaea 2008-01-24 ch 13, | abuseGreat Story!! |
| Rothos1 2007-01-15 ch 13, anon. | abuseGreat series, yes I have read them all; including the Trials of the Empire. So far Trials is great, and I love all your other writing. Let me just say that it has turned out beter than my meek attempt,believe me I write badly, I've been severely flamed by both betas and readers. And yes these flames are where they give it to me with both barrels.Speaking of which I was hoping you could point me in the direction of a good beta; believe me so far I have had bad luck with betas and I'd rather get nudged in the right direction by a fellow author than have to put out the call and stumble through. Please reply at your leisure. Sincerely, Rothos1 |
| AngusH 2006-12-02 ch 13, | abuseBrilliantly done. The way that you've redone the story is amazingly clever, I really like the original characters too (Which I often don't in stories). Wonderful! |
| avidgokufan 2006-11-30 ch 13, | abuseI have to tell you, I have really enjoyed these. There are a few things that have bothered me, like the Angel/Cordelia thing, but on the whole this is a very well written story. I am excited for the bad guys to try to tempt Buffy to the Dark Side, that should be good. You are an impressive writer. Please continue. |
| Jedi-Princess 2006-11-28 ch 13, anon. | abuseWELL? |
| Wild320 2006-11-22 ch 13, | abuseYour SW stories are great. I can't wait till you write five. I hope to see more Ben/Buffy. Hope the next story comes soon. |
| Carms 2006-11-16 ch 13, anon. | abuseWonderful series. I loved every one of the fics. I also enjoyed the firefly bits included into the language. Please post the new episode soon. I look forward to your work. |
| Yvonnia 2006-11-14 ch 13, | abuseWow, you're just kicking these babies out; I can't believe Episode IV is over. And what's with that ending? How can you do that to you loyal readers? What kind of author are you? I mean other than insanely talented kind? Huh? Answer me! Needless to say, I'll be eagerly awaiting the next episode. |
| Tombadgerlock 2006-11-14 ch 13, | abuseNo, not the dark side for buffy and joyce :/ I have, of course, a few reasons for that. The first being that i believe that amster jedi is too emotionaly stable ot be tempted by the dark side, no matter his attachment- luke, for an exemple, consdered himself a master only when he had fought back the dark side after the clone of the empire thing. Of course, i haven't reaad the latest book, but i am hoping luke isn't the betrayer. Also, you have insinuated into the story that the dark side is stronger, somewhat, while i believe that it is easier, but that a jedi is eventualy stronger without it- luke would be once again an exemple, as his strentgh testify, even though he is not the one with the most mid-chlorian or such things. |
| Raiining 2006-11-13 ch 13, | abuseO Boba Fet raised her. RAISED her. Oh dear. Joyce is not a happy camper ... TALON KARDE! My main man! So glad to see him: can't wait till we get more Mara, and how many lovables are you going to indulge us with, here? :D As always, thank you for updating - can't wait for the next installament! |
| Sean Malloy-1 2006-11-12 ch 13, | abuseLove the ending, hopefully I and your other readers can read chapter one of Episode V soon |
| Spike94763 2006-11-12 ch 13, | abusea great finish to another great episode. Keep up the great work and can't wait for the sequel! |
| Lt. Cmdr. Radner 2006-11-12 ch 13, | abusesweetness, this soo rocked. Looking forward to Ep 5 and all the story telling goodness you have coming up and as for Fett: Dead man walking. |
| Little Cherry Tree 2006-11-12 ch 13, | abuseThis was an excellent end to a great story, but you leave us wanting more. Joyce's storyline sure has taken an interesting twist, hasn't it? It'll be interesting to see where her character grows from here, especially if she's around Willow for any great length of time. I like the idea of Buffy training Leia because I like the idea of Leia becoming a Jedi now instead of later. I'm really happy Willow is sticking with Anakin and that Padme somewhat approves because now she'll be able to do something positive to get her daughter back. I cannot wait for Episode V. I do hope you plan on giving us just a little taste before the new year. Please? |
| Snag DOA 2006-11-12 ch 13, | abuseHey there. Long time reader, first time reviewer. Love this entire series. It's not easy to balance the whimsy of BtVS with the grander scope of Star Wars. Until I saw this and Winterd's take on this particular WhatIf, I wouldn't have thought it'd be feasible. Thanks for the fun reads, and if you ever find yourself needing someone to beta, please keep me in mind. |