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| Whee! 2007-08-04 ch 10, anon. | abuseTeh fluff! RoyEd is so cute. And you really do have to laugh at that "ritarded" flame. -laughs uncontrollably- Ahem . . . I have to get back to reading now! |
| Vixyfox 2007-07-10 ch 3,  | abuseThis is good so far. Unfortanetly, my damn sister is making me get off for an hour so I shall finish reading it then. |
| indigo's ocean 2007-05-08 ch 14, | abuseHmm... This story, honestly, wasn't as good as some of your others. Sometimes the narration seemed a little rough (which I can understand), and it was a bit confusing. A lot of the middle chapters were a bit weird, but I liked how the epilogue wrapped everything up. It was confusing to me what those little introspective moments/paragraphs were until the end. But despite that, this was all in all a great story. I'm always so happy when I find completed ones. ^^ -grins- Now I'm off to read the sequel! |
| indigo's ocean 2007-05-08 ch 1, | abuseThis chapter made me laugh. It reminded me of the scene in Harry Potter 5 where HArry goes back in the pensive and sees his dad and sirius and lupin and wormtail taking their OWL's. Envy is Sirius, Ed is James, and Al is Lupin. xD |
| Koyuki Sakuya 2007-04-14 ch 14, | abusewoah nice story...very nice story |
| Demonically Angelic Neko88 2006-11-07 ch 8, | abuseHoly shit...THAT ANGAT WAS AWSOME! But you were a complete sadistic bitch with that gore, but, I.Love. Angst! I can't help it! |
| Sectored 2006-10-02 ch 14, | abuse*GASP* I must say, this is a great epilogue/ending for Nothing I Won't Give!! I'm glad there's a sequel! I shall go read that now! XD |
| Sectored 2006-10-01 ch 13, | abuse! ZOMG! must go to epilogue to see what happenes next...!! |
| Sectored 2006-10-01 ch 12, | abuseWOOT! FLASHBACK! |
| Sectored 2006-10-01 ch 11, | abuse:(! poor al! and ed. and envy. Ahahaha... but it's one 'o envy's evil plots, right? ahahaha... I said i'd review every chapter, ne? And so far I have! right? right right. ^^ I have! and i will review all! Heh, I'm glad there's a sequel!! |
| Sectored 2006-10-01 ch 10, | abuseFLUFF! wootz~ |
| Sectored 2006-10-01 ch 9, | abuseNo...! not alphonse! but actually, that's a great plot twist! ahahaha... you enjoy twisting them plots, ne? |
| Sectored 2006-10-01 ch 8, | abuseGAH! such gore! Poor nina! :'( it's hard to write dramatic scenes like that.. but you did a great job! XD |
| Sectored 2006-09-09 ch 7, | abuse“All you need to know is it’s about you-know-what,” Ed replied, his voice a mere whisper. “Kitties?” Al asked hopefully. Ed smacked him around the head. AHAHAH! i laughed so hard when i saw that. Hilarious XD! Leave it to al to say ktties instead 'o alchemy! as i write this i am eating an orange/clemetine/tangerine! oh em gee! OMG! Hohenheim! well on to the next chappy! |
| Sectored 2006-09-03 ch 6, | abuseO.O! o so envy's joined up with teh humunculis! great chap! short yet sweet XD well sorta sweet. the brown hairded guy who got envy fired was a jerk-baka-face. yup. lolz XD |