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emma
2007-03-02
ch 17, anon.
abuseaww fantastic ending! Zain!! :D:D

hope to read your new one soon

btw totally off topic, but poor sawyer on lost! he so loves her :(
Minion Of Sekhmet
2007-02-26
ch 17,
abuseAw, that was so sweet! Zain is the real romantic, isn’t he? :D I reckon he can beat Phil hands down when he turns on the charm. LOL. This last chapter was really quite fluffy, but oh so romantic! //Sighs// I’m so glad Robert Ward went down, but I still wish Zain had gotten his fists into him first!

I think that maybe the ‘I Love You’ part was a little out of character, but the next few lines after that was so realistic and sweet that it is easily ignored.

All in all, a lovely little Zain romance, complete with arrogance. What more do you want?! Keep the awesome work Vikki, I’m looking forward to seeing what you post next (As well as the sequel to this. More Zain? Yippee!!), maybe some more Zain-Phil friendship? //Wink wink. Maybe even throw Mickey in there? He and Zain were friends before Jordan Tomlin was shot.//

But whatever you write, I’m sure it is going to be good, as your fanfics always are. Keep up the fantastic work and happy writing!!
SuperBex
2007-02-25
ch 17,
abuseFantastic ending for a fantastic fic!! :P
I'm glad that they didnt sleep together at the end. That way was much more realistic.
I really enjoyed this fic; maybe a sequel?! :P
Well done! *virtual hug* Lol!
Bex
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Bite Me.You Know You Want T...
2007-02-25
ch 17,
abuseaww

lol

x
sam-ros-cooper
2007-02-25
ch 17,
abuseaww so sweet luv the ending cant wait for the sequel! gr8 story.luv ya Sarah xx
Emz25
2007-02-24
ch 17,
abuseAw... so sweet! i love it i cant wait for the sequel and i am sure it will be just as gd if not better (is that possible) as this 1! keep it up babe! luv emz xx
Lornz
2007-02-24
ch 17,
abuseAww! What a lovely ending! Really looking forward to the sequel! Love the Sarah/Zain pairing! Great Story! Loved it! x
feeling free x
2007-02-24
ch 17,
abuseYay for Sarah and Zain! Glad it was a happy ending for them :)
Great ending to this fic, looking forward to reading the sequel!
Beccax
kelbobs15
2007-02-24
ch 17,
abuseAw! It's a great end to a great fic hun! Am glad they got 2geva and the guy got put away! yay! Its a happy ending all round! Luv Kellyx
Bite Me.You Know You Want T...
2007-02-18
ch 16,
abuseplz rite more im desparate
SuperBex
2007-02-18
ch 16,
abuseMuch apologies for not reviewing the last chapter! It was, of course, awesome! Loving the SP cuteness! *squee*
Its completely evil of you to leave it there!! You had better update soon... *considers threatening disownment...* :P
Bex
xx
kelbobs15
2007-02-18
ch 16,
abuseNO! Don't leave it there! U must update soon! Luv kellyx
sam-ros-cooper
2007-02-18
ch 16,
abuseplez be nice 2 Sarah let him go down gr8 chap ud soon.
luv ya lots Sarah xx
Emz
2007-02-18
ch 16, anon.
abusegreat chapter plz ud soon coz i wana no if that guy is going dwn... be nice 2 sarah lol! xx
Minion Of Sekhmet
2007-02-17
ch 16,
abuseWow, loving the Zain angst here Vikki! ;) The first paragraph really tugged at my heart and strings. This was all the more heartbreaking as the last episode of The Bill I watched last (And it was last night too) had Zain angst! You got his character dead on, too. Your writing totally bought back images of the show.

I also ADORED the part where it says:

"Zain couldn't suppress his smug grin any longer.

"Yes I did. We've got him. We've nailed him. Robert Ward is going down for a long time." He said proudly."

That is SUCH a Zain line, it almost made me squeal! God, I love Zain's arrogance and pride and you expressed it wonderfully in this fic, as you did with his caring side, which we sometimes get to see on the show. The Sam/Phil moments work well too, that Phil is such a charmer. LOL. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, only this one is going to be the last! //Wails//

My only real nitpick with this chapter is that the first paragraph may have fared better had it been split into two, but that’s a tiny issue, and probably me being picky. Keep up the great work!
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