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| AJ 2007-12-14 ch 3, anon. | abuseThis is turning out very interesting, but you DO need to start the plot in motion soon, because until you can, you might keep writing random things, and the chapters will get worse and worse. |
| Rainfall Ghostheart's lover 2007-02-03 ch 3,  | abuseA little too talkative and all the color mash in to 1 |
| Snowlia 2006-10-16 ch 3, | abuseIt was nicley written just a bit confusing with all the names and horses. The portal thing was a bit confusing as well. Did they go back to Ravenswood? I find no fault besides that and it's shortness but every story has short chapters now and again, update soon! ~Snowlia |
| Sam's Firefly 2006-10-15 ch 3, | abusewell, I got Roan right! Actually, that wasn't too bad. I'll bet Kara gets a little ticked when she finds that her kid is a lot like Adriane. Haha! They went to Ravenswood! |
| Sam's Firefly 2006-10-09 ch 2, | abuseo um, how about Roan, Lana, and Roger? I dunno. I like Roan's character the best so far. :D I liked the chapter so far. |
| Snowlia 2006-10-09 ch 2, | abuseYAY! You finally updates! Hm...I guess Ben will be one, and either Mira of Serena, and I have no idea for the thrid. I have a guestion though, does Ben have green skin like Lorren or human like Kara? |
| Snowlia 2006-07-07 ch 1, | abuseI really like this. It's a cool plot that they've been away so long. It was kind of confusing with all the kids but I still very much enjoyed it. The only problem I saw was you calling Marlin Merlin instead. It's Marlin, like the fishy. |
| Sam's Firefly 2006-07-07 ch 1, | abusethis category has been really slow. I like this a lot. You detail everything nicely, except the ages of Adriane's children after her firstborn. Keep it up! |