This is not the Al I know and love! Jk! Of course it is! Very well done! A few typos thou.

I CAN'T BELIEVE IT ONLY HAS LIKE...what? Two reviews? What the hell is wrong with these people!

This is...is...HEAVEN! Awesome idea, awesome writing style angst, incest ,FEELINGS!You rock. Seriously.The only bad thing is that it's a one-shot. Maybe you could write more and change the plot of the movie a little. THAT WOULD BE SO AWESOME! I absolutly adore your work btw. Verboten kicks ass.Yur in my favs. FOREVER! I LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR NEW THINGS!

Rowan: You know, that's really not fair. My in-the-works new Elricest story is based exactly around this time in the story and look! You've written this. Well, at least it verifies some things for me: I also have Al wake up to that golden dome, wondering "where is my Brother? Where is our Mother? Where am I? Did the transmutation work? Where is…where is Brother? Where are my clothes?" and when he is found, he also has a fever...anyway, I love this! Ubiquitous is a very cool word indeed...I like how you got into Al's mind. This is something that I had not thought about before- that he would, well, feel that Ed abandoned him, and that if he saw any pictures of Ed during that four-year period, that he would not recognize him...hmm. Very thought-provoking!

Beautiful..I loved it. Your Al matches Al's character perfectly except for the hating ed part and acting selfish and all. So...more more more! Update update update!