Aww so adorable. You really make the cutest oneshots.

Gosh oneshots like this really make me feel all, ek! No words to explain it. I just scream a loud scream after it ends. I don't know why.

Poor Hayner though. It must suck to be him, liking his bestfriend since he was nine, but can never be with her. Must feel awful, but for some reason, I'd like to feel the same thing too. To bad I can't, I move to much, and all my guy friends are jerks.

You should make more oneshots, they make me feel all warm inside hehe. Well keep up the great and lovable work :)

Aw! What a cute ending! And I think you've made me a Hayner x Olette fan now...O.O But anyways, This is so adorable! Keep it up!

I loved it, I adore this couple and yet there arent that many fics about them, I hope you write more

Aw! w

How cute! w

I always thought those two are a good looking match _

Great job on this one D

How Key-OT! I loved it! :3

I support RoxasxOlette, actually, but this works just fine!

Aw, that was too cute! I loved it!

Have you read a fanfiction called sea salt ice cream? It's not mine but I read it a while ago and it's super cute, you'd like it! (it's also a haynerxolette fic! XD!)

Keep up the good work! By the way, I love yor fic, "the skater and the artist!"

wow

yeah, that pairing is sweet xDD

i like the thing about counting stars xD

I liked it, sweet and simple.

verry good, I'll chekc some fo yor other storyies..if my computer lets me, sorry if eveyrhting is kinda wiermds, I brokew my finger so, yeah

They're one of my top three couples in KH. It's Sora/Kairi or Roxas/Namine first, and then next to them is Hayner/Olette. _

I like Hayner's point of view here. It nets his personality and voice quite well - it's just very Hayner-like I suppose. Will you be writing more H/O centered stories (oneshots or chapters)?

Because yeah, I agree with you about not seeing many stories for these two that dig deeper into their relationship. Currently, I'm working on a new KH story that includes them. But all the couples start out slow, followed by confusion and a little chaos. I'm hoping things will work out (I'm sure it will). If you like Hayner/Olette, do you think you can check up on my story once it's out? The more insight fom readers, the better I'll get. :) I'm looking forward to some improvement on my part.

Very awesome story! Keep upp the good work!

Aww!

That was so cute!

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This is a neat paring...never really thought about them before.

Keep up the good work!

It was also from a guy's poin of view, thats rare.

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Godo job!