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Reviews For: The Carpenter

puppiescute a.k.a. Mic Mic
2007-05-01
ch 1,
abuseI really enjoyed this fic a lot. I liked how you put Jesus into it. It seems like something Jeannie would do and if Jesus did come down to help them I think you portrayed him very well. This was a wonderful fic and you are an excellent writer.
Mic Mic
Danja
2007-03-17
ch 1,
abuseWonderful story.

One minor nit, though: Jeannie does not use contractions (Barbara Eden has said as much in interviews. Where we might say "don't", Jeannie would say "do not". Where we might say "I'm" or "doesn't", Jeannie would say "I am" or "does not".)


Other than that, great story! :)
Quiver
2006-08-14
ch 1,
abuseI just happened upon this fic. I really liked it.
Maggief99
2006-07-07
ch 1,
abuseWOW! What an awesome story! I really needed this one today. Thanks for writing and posting it!
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