wow this story was amazing!!
i loved the plot, and i absolutely love the angelina/fred relationship.
it was brilliantly written :D !
please write more fred/angelina :D

this story iz the shit!i luv this, ur a great writer and im looking forward 2 more of ur complete genious line of work!

awesome chapter kept me in suspence the whole time good job

Ah! I feel content as a reader!
You finished this story perfectly!
Everyone ends up happy, fred and Angie are still madly in love, and Angie gets sto keep flying! I'm a little sad that this story is over though. I looked forward to your updates! Continue to write, I beg of you! If not this story then another! You've made me a fan!;) happy reading/writing!

That was wonderful! This was a great ending to a great story!

Keep writing, and arrivederci, amici!

Oh my goodness. If i was Angelina i would have stood up, slapped Fred on the head, grabbed my bag of money, packed my things as quickly as possible, and hightail it to the nearest apparation zone. Really, the nerve!

Anyway, great chapter!

arrivederci amici

I figured he stole the plans when he mysteriously had to return home but i never thought he would be associated with zonkos. go twist

maybe I'm not to bright, I don't know!;)
But I seriously had no idea that Konzo was a Zonko!
Well Done! I think I was too busy concentrating on Fred and Angelina to care about Konzo!
That was brilliant! And Pili is THE Grandaughter? Wow! Loved it, loved it, loved it!

Speechless!

yes, but it does make the story more interesting.

I hate to say it, but it serves Fred right. He's a complete idiot and Angie was right to storm out of the meeting. And what makes it worse is that even when he realized what was wrong, he didn't put his thought processes together enough to figure out WHY. So after stealing his girlfriend's money, he had his brilliant idea - the one he stole from Angelina for - stolen. Karma is a...well, you get the point.

That said, I adored this chapter. Bringing all of Angelina's doubts to light and you showed us that Fred has been giving her just cause for them. And poor Pili. But I bet no one will be talking about marrying her off in the next chapter, huh?

Great chapter! Fred, you idiot!

Loved this chpter. Like the affair between pili and the blind guy. Is the song "A Wizard's Staff Has A Knob On The End"

AWW!! It was great! I absolutely loved it... I have no suggestions, sorry?
but keep it up!

Hey great chapter! I have to read the next one now, looking forward to it!!