Very sad, poor little girl. The Little Matchgirl is the only fairytale that ever makes me wanna cry, it's so cold and beautiful but it's not supposed to be beautiful because it's cold and that's what makes you feel like crying.

Very nice. Did you mean to say "it" 3x in the 4th line from the end?

It's so beautiful - you definitely deserve more reviews for it!

I really enjoyed this poem...you portrayed the helpless melancholy of the poor little match girl very well. I've always avoided the old story though...it's so sad! Keep up the good work; I like your symbolism. The only thing I would change would be to not make this symbolism of yours as well...blatant. (Just critiquing, don't worry) (: Don't get me wrong though, you have a wonderful gift, and I will definatly look for your name in the future. Keep it up! ^_^

-Vivid Angel