Wow. . .this is great. And you bring up some good logical points too. . .

Beautiful.
Though I believe God is /there/, I still have always felt sympathy for the fallen angels, who only wanted to serve God.

Anyways, nice story. I like how you were able to completely get into a different mindset.

Finaly! I know you probly wont read this and I'll PM you too but I am so happy that yo wrote this! It really is just so unfair! Everybody else gets forgiven, but not him! I mean if you see things from his point of view it's justified!Like if you had a favorite son and then adopted one and loved him better!

That was amazing. Excellent job.

Beautiful.
I still have hope for poor, lost Lucifer . . .

Aw, He cares. Well written! Sounds a lot like him. Such jealousy!
Anyway, I loved it. Happy writing!

Oh... Poor Lucy-sama! * snugs *

I liked this.

Entity and the Keeper

Lucifer could never regret anything he has done or ask for forgiveness. He is no longer an angel. He has turned completely evil. You write nicely however. God cares for Lucifer. He is a Loving God.

I agree with you on the point of sympathy, and on the point that we don't give Lucifer enough credit. On the point of 'God did not seem to care', I agree in some ways, though not all.

I think the best thing is that you are taking a stand of sympathy. After all, who doesn't deserve to be forgiven?

A wonderful job all around.

L.S.

I normally don't read this sort of thing, but when I saw it was Lucifer's point of view, I was interested. I personally don't understand how people can -not- have the tiniest bit of sympathy, so I agree one-hundred percent with what you've written. Good job. =]

(in a calm voice) i don't agree with ya, that's all i'm gonna say...