Please update as soon as possible! PLEASE!

hey pls update Nya!

it's such a long time since you update :(

pls put up the next chappie too

Um... 100yen isn't much...like at all. 100 yen is only 1 USD. one dollar... not much... at all... definetly not enough to buy luch, and a cd, or just lunch... Sorry... anyway other than that, pretty good...

Ja Ne

Emma

ryoma is so greedy...i wish i could sip from his ponta, though...hehe, sorry, i'm just day dreaming! nice chappy! and eiji's cute too!

Try using some captial letters in your work. You need extreme work on your grammer.

need to capitolize (spelled something like that) ur sentences. it doesn't look good

Not bad. The grammar stuffs get's annoying, but since you said you wrote it in filipino (you said that in the first chapter.) I'm guessing that English isn't a first language for you, so very good. Just one thing; 100 yen isn't really that much. It's about a few dollars. Atleast, I *think* so. Since Eiji bought a pair of shoes for like 24,0 yen onces I think...or maybe it was 12,0 yen...anyways it was in one of the anime eps. *nods*

lols this was funny. please update soon. YOur very observant, i just noticed now that he does drink Ponta

it is very very funny! I love it! hope you update soon!

GAH! . . . . TEL! *imagines* Um...it has artifical grape flavoring, Blue #5 and Red #3 (and yes, I have no idea what the different types of dye look like, I just like the numbers)? *shrugs*

It has a good plot, but it would be better if it was written like an actual story with descriptions, not like a script with actions in parenthesis, which is against the rules of the website. Not to be rude or anything, it could be a great story, but I think it could be better.