Wonderful! Terrific way slowly telling the back story and basic plot. I found the accent(s) difficult to read however - perhaps doing a just a few words would get the point across that Beau has an accent, but be much easier to read. Also I noticed that even the adults say "Tad" instead of "Dad" and I was wondering if that was on purpose - 'cause that also was distracting form the story. I love both of these categories, so I LOVE crossovers! Terrific overall job!

Oh how sad!

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so cool, really really cool. can't wait for the next chaper. really like the way that it's going. keep at it.

*shriek* This isn't done! I need another chapter, MORE... NOW! I wanna see how this time with Jim turns out for the twins. I also wanna see the idiots that separated Vin from his boys like this get their just deserts too. Gr

So Dev is a Sentinel and maybe his own brother Beau is his guide? *curious*

Please may we have more of this story and may your muse be inspired.


Thanks a very avide reader.

I have read this again, and keep trying to picture Jim's Panther and Dev's Dragon meeting in the spirit world. (and Jim thinks "normal" spirit animals are strange).

Great story! Keep going, any more stories with the twins in the works? Just how are Jim & Blair going to help Dev?

Ahh! Very cool! You must have had this planed form the beginning! I like it!! Well written! I really like your writing . You have great imagination and insight. I hope you continue to write about our favorite 7 men. Although I think you are a bit prejudice in favor of Vin and Ezra! :P

Still a good story!! Well done!

Really good story so far.

oh great.. now i'm cryin again.. sigh.. sniff.. i just love those boys..

Oh, thank you! thank you! I love this!

"They followed me home, can I keep them?" My favorite like in this little jewel at this point. Oh and I love that you can see the personalities of the 7 reflected in the twins. Can't wait to see where you plan on taking this. I should admit...Never seen the Sentinal...No cable (Moment or mourning for me) Ok, but still found this very interesting and looking forward to the next chapter.

I am really enjoying this story. Please update soon. Very interesting to find out why Dev can't talk. Please post more soon. Beside I can't wait to see what the 7 do to that attorney.