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Tina Marina
2008-06-02 . chapter 5
So sweet and sentimental. I like your writing and it's too bad these stories aren't recent because I would love to have an end.
Tina Marina
2008-06-02 . chapter 4
Whoops, I just read 4 chapters without reviewing once! I hope this story continues to get attention, since you write a good Jack and a rightfully conflicted Elizabeth.
Alana84
2008-04-17 . chapter 5
OMG, I'm literary gob smacked, and that's a very good thing, hehe!

I more then love this fic, it's so good. The plot's great and so is the portrayal of the characters, especially Jack/Elizabeth! Furthermore the interaction between them is great as well and so are the emotions you're describing. Well done, m'dear!

Please do continue and write more soon...cause I cannot simply wait to read more!
Alexa
2007-06-27 . chapter 5
OMG u totally kick a*s! Finally someone who knows how to write the characters...i love how you elaborate on the feelings, instead of jsut stating it blankly like some people...that's more my style, too...
purplekirbyshaft
2007-06-02 . chapter 5
its really really god write more ASAP!
femmevixen13
2007-02-01 . chapter 5
Great story so far! I love the chemistry between Jack and Liz. Please update!
The-Pirate-Lass
2007-01-05 . chapter 5
You should continue this! Definitely! It's rather good, although the chapters are a little short...
JeanieBeanie33
2006-11-18 . chapter 5
Not a single word in this chapter except the song lyrics, yet I get the situation exactly! Good job!
howlongmustiwait
2006-11-17 . chapter 5
Very good story - I hope you can update again really soon! Short chapters/long chapters - I don't care as long as you update! (Of course, I personally like long chapters...)
TheRumQueen
2006-11-17 . chapter 5
It's horrible how you left me hanging...

But then again it's horrible I didn't review every chapter...

Sorry 'bout that, I just find it easier to review the most recent chapter rather than reviewing every chapter.

Err so, the story is excellent. I'm definatelly enjoying it, and I honestly cannot wait for more. Please update soon, the suspense is killing me!
Nellie-Lovett
2006-08-12 . chapter 4
wow that was realy good i love your stories there amazing!Keep going with this one it's realy good i love it!!
Tigerlily Brown
2006-08-05 . chapter 3
Very nice. Hurry up and do more!
JeanieBeanie33
2006-08-05 . chapter 4
I really pity Elizabeth. That's gotta be the hardest decision ever: Jack or Will.
Sci-Fi Writer At Work
2006-07-16 . chapter 4
Great story so far. Please write more soon.
Tigerlily Brown
2006-07-15 . chapter 4
Oh! I get it. Now you're writing the stuff in between. Update soon!
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