Awesome! Loved it! You should continue this and make it a kind of forbidden love thing with Zelda carrying Vaati's child. That would be awesome!

Oh, and if you decide not to, can I? I have some very...interesting ideas...

Anyway, please PM me.

PS: I promise to give you credit for the idea if you let me expand on this. But it's your choice. :P

Holly triforce! This is soooooo hoooooooot! If you plan on makeing more let me know. It is truely great

You should write another chapter in which Zelda is carrying Vaati's child. I think that would be interesting... XD Anyway, I loved it! It was absolutely spectacular! It also really brought my inner fangirl out.. Hehe, and it only made me ship this pairing more!

You are NOT bad at writing porn

That was Sexy! omfg frigging awsome. love how you made vati a seductive badboy lol. I think you should write more...but thats my opinion. :P

More more more that was excellent perfect plot

I love this pairing, though this story makes me think I can never see it the same way again. Not that it's a bad thing. xD

That was rather... interesting. This is one of the two Zelda Vaati stories with sex. Though the other one just had Vaati jacking off (I laughed quietly to myself...). One-shots dissapoint me. I'd enjoy to read more of this, as you fit their characters well.

Happily wasting your AA batteries,

Wii-Mote

OMG XD AWESOME! LOVED IT XD YEEEESSSS X3 I love Vaati and Zelda together sooo much _ It's my favorite pairing but I still love link and zelda too. You should definitely write more, maybe even a story with this pairing XD

I LOVED THIS STORY! I WOULD BE SO HAPPY IF YOU WRITE MORE VAATI & ZELDA STORIES! *PUPPY EYES* please?

My favorite pairing ever... AND DELICIOUS SMUT OF THEM. I APPROVE, I APPROVE SO HARD. Most of my reading this incited gigglefits and be bobbing up and down in my chair like a mad idiot. So thank you for this. It makes me feel all warm and fuzzy on the inside... and smile like the fangirly dork that I am. 8D

I can't look at Minish Cap or oranges the same way ever again (.

Despite my hatred towards this pairing, good story D.

make her pregnant with his kid for an epuloge

write more

I read this fanfic awhile ago,but every time I eat an orange I think about it. I don't know if that's a good thing or not...but I like this fic!

that was awesome! should write more