Wicked story. :)

This is a good start. Believable and intriguing enough to make me keep reading. More later after the other parts.

Cool! Write more! Awesome start!

Just FYI, some readers find it a real turn-off when an author demands reviews or else a story won't be finished. Some of us don't like to read a story until it IS in fact finished, because so many authors these days don't complete what they start, for whatever reasons. Don't hold your stories ransom to reviews. After all, if you don't have at least some confidence in your own work and its merit, why should potential readers?

So far I like what I have read and I can't wait to read more.

I've really enjoyed this so far so please do continue writing it and I shall look forward to reading it.

continue please! you've piqued my interest.

I love this story so far, I cant wait for the next part, I hope Amy gets to the cafe before Decker and his men do

Sarah )

I'm intrigued! Please keep going! As for suggestions, I know not many people agree with me, but I always thought Amy and Hannibal were good together, so maybe you could throw in a little romance? Well, it's your story, so write it however you want, even with a different pairing. I'll still read it, because it's good!

I liked this chapter. It was good.

great story write more.