well, an excellent oneshot, but making it a af/oc would be stretching it a little.

*claps* brava, brava regazza ;D,
brittney

This was lovely, as all your works :)

Your writing never ceases to amaze me. The first peice I read from you was Cu..Cuch..Cucha...Cuchalain? I hope I got it right. I've read about the actual Cuchalain and ever since reading your story, I've been into Celtic mythology which is...AMAZING for lack of a better word. Anyways, about your story. I liked it. You have this amazing way of writing. Good vocabulary...excellent description...an air of versilimitude (ha! I used a big word:)!) LOVED the story. Keep writing...PLEASE!

Yes. You should write a piece about Artemis and Robyn. I like how you spell her name. ^_^

Good story, I'm feeling kind of tired at the moment, and my brain isn't working properly. And I still need to at least start that NaNoWriMo competion. I wish I would've heard about it sooner...so now I just have to kind of wing it...it usually takes me a while to come up with a novel length story. So I can't analyze your story like I usually do. But all I know was that is was good, and has some sort of hidden meaning to it. Somewhere.

^-^ Heh, pretty. I can imagin a sequel, of the two conversing about, perhaps, another quote. The conversation, the point, I have no idea, but a bemused Mrs.Fowl near the end could be fun her actual thoughts are unknown to me. Use the any of this if you want.

Also, you could provide some background to this "Experiment" as a side ficlet.

Interesting drabbles. It's quite interesting to watch Artemis and money interact. I mean I've always thought of him wanting money for money's sake, as a means of keeping score, but this was interesting. Maybe not extrodinarily fantabulous but quite a decent fic in its own right.

Interesting.

PLEASE don't make that woman a romantic interest! *sighs* Personally, I liked the first one best, because it was the most amusing. Little Artemis toddling around, handing out money for a loaf of bread... *laughs*

However, the last part was probably the most in depth one, which is probably why YOU like it best. We always tend to like our better writing.

I saw only one typo, which was good. You said: "swimming balls" instead of "swimming pools". I'm not sure how you made that mistake...

But nice fic, Mozzie. Keep working on that long one... (You ARE doing a long one, aren't you? I though I hear something about that.)

O.R.

I'm going to break my review up because of my shameful laziness (in other words, I don't want to have to make everything flow).

1: I really liked the thought of Artemis enjoying the subtleties of taste; his complexities are what makes him fascinating. young!Artemis is so dang cute, and that ending made me burst out laughing, quite frankly. Some concrit: "'Go and sit back down,' said Mrs Brown, the senior carer, and therefore they greyest and the fattest." Umm...why were greyest and fattest italisized? Also, "But he never returned to the nursery seemed a bit random." Probably would have been better off without that.

2: Really nothing wrong with this one; it's pretty good. It's always relieving in the books and fic to see Artemis vulnerable, because it makes him more human somehow.

3: This one is my favorite one , too. It is a little OOC, but it still rings true, if that makes any sense whatsoever. I find the fact that Artemis feels an obligation to a person who needs him intriguing, so a fic focusing on a relationship between them (if she turns out to be around his age) would be lovely. She seems intelligent enough to deal with him, but refreshingly down-to-earth for an OC. Pretty pretty please?

Oh, yes. And I agree with Dim Aldebaran on the fact that you do seem to meander a bit. Sorry.

But these are altogether quite nice.

hey i totally luvd this.. hha. the last one wz the best as u said.. but i likd how in the first two u were like.. and he suddenly likd money/rain. etc. sumthing like that. that wz good..haa.. and this wz a really good random fic.. u shuld rite more their interesting. and i dont kno wut to say. keep up the good work

I think no one has ever written something like this in theme and characterisation before in fandom. Or perhaps they have and I am just an ignorant freak. *nod nod* most likely.
But anywho, I think this is very ...good!! Though I don't know...I've always preferred Artemis with little or no conscience.

Sorry for the bad review. *sheepish*

-Z-

*grin* Well, I can see the typos...

In any case, I think the biggest problem is concisement - you go into little tangents that distract from the main plot and muddle with the flow of the piece. That's your usual problem, though, so it's just something to work on in general. It's mostly a thing with going back and editing, if you can't fix that first draft.

The first one, for some reason, reminded me of "Oliver Twist" - 'I would like some bread', instead of "I would like some more'... don't ask.

I'll spare you my "Support the Orion Awards!" thing that I usually tag on reviews - I just have this niggling idea that you know what they are... *grin*

I liked them. They were...special somehow. I think you should write a piece with Robyn and Artemis. I'd read it.

Tiki Rane Gobell

My favourite is the last one too...Will there be more chapters ? And will Arty and Robyn fell in love ? :)
Good job, anyway