Jack seems perfectly in character. He is a pig and you do a portrayal of him perfectly. Keep writing you are doing a magnificant job.

You are a fantastic writer! Your stories just draw me in. The story is so funny that you make me crack up! I can't wait to read your new story!

Haha. That was pretty good. Mary-Suish, but still funny and all. :P

i have fallen in love wqith this story and will therefore add it to my faves. lov3e ya sweetie!

HOLY SHIT! I had wanted to review on evey single chappie,BUT you had already completed the story so it wouldn't have made much sence other than to fill your inbox up, savvy? So my oppoligies

I love your stories, yes I do!

The Lizzy bashing, not so much. But hay to each to their own opinion, right?

*adds you to fave author list

BRILIANT! I actually liked reading a mary sue story... i'm guessing wat jack's new theme song is...lol.

lol. really good. did you memerize all the lines? cuz i mean- tch, i canjust imagine the whole movie right now :P

haha im luvin this story like hell!

its great...weird...and a hellova lot different than other jack/oc thingees. so great!

Ma favrite line wis:

Lizzie?” I looked at her, “You’re a bitch. Treat Will nicely or I really will bust your head like a piece of fruit and Will?” I grinned, “Dear, dear William. You have great sex,”

A work of ( thinkin of a really sofisticated word) hell ill just say art

xCodax

I love the way ypu finished this

Hell yeah! I don't remember ever bein' so energetically syched whilst reading a fic before EVER! Friggin' awesome... And the "Dead Squirrel's Best" thing sounds like it'll be funny as all hell and then some. best wishes for the future fics!

*'Firefly'*

Aw! its sad to see it end but it was a good read, oh and I heard that song before. It goes something like run along with Captain Jack padadidado run along with Captain Jack, well I can't wait for PotC 1.5

That was a humourous and enjoyable story amidst all the chaos of DMC fics.

oh! A new theme song! Is it "captain jack" from the DDR game? *squee* I have a music video of jack to that song! Oh and you'll prolly only hafta wait until november or december. damn...that IS a long time...Ah well

woohoo

i loved it lass

lol

damn pirate talk

anyhoo

i will be contently waiting for 1.5

and if i really want to

once the second movie hits the cheap thater here

i shall go sereval thousand times

and recite the movie for you

how's that?