AWESOME story, you got it, just perfectly
please do more endings!

this is something i have been looking for...for a very long time.

i had a story idea SORT of like this recently posted in the ranma forums, maybe you should check it out? it's a ranma/silenthill story idea

i was really hoping someone would pick it up, and hoping even more for it to be a ranma\shampoo pairing.

and after reading this marvelous story, i have to say i want to see it done even more now. this, and it's alternate ending, were truly an epic story.

just wish you would have divided it up into seperate chapters.

that... was a work of art...

omg i loved this story but plzz make another alternate ending witch they all...ecept ukyo get out alive! becuse my fav charictor is ryoga and you made him evil so sadd so u now make happy ending! it levels out you know they all die in one and then they all live in one 2 live 3 live 4 live bla bla ect. just plz make it plz o and have you ever tyed reading this while listing to this song



in the background it scared the shit outa me! i was so into the story and listined to the song that i didint here my dad behing me and i screamed my head off lmao i think i almost gave him a heart attack lol

~THIS.IS.JUST.

haha anyways,I really like the story. I was grining ear to ear when I started reading this. Sadly, I'm still not done finishing Silent Hill in PS1 but at least I can relate to the Silent Hill story and the monsters~ I'm still in the hospital part and I freak out everytime a mutated monster nurse appears trying to kill me using a knife... Haha... =3 It's really good and I hope you add mor AU endings that are darker than the second one. I like it better than the first ending and I was kinda pinning for a Ranma x Ryoga pairing although I have no idea why I thought of it~ great story... Please continue this~

Nice story you have, the begging is almost strait from ‘fight club’. After reading it you seemed to of rushed it, if you slowed down and built up the story over three or four chapters with more detail and depth then what you had already had then it could have been somewhat better. I have to agree with other posters that you did make ranma a bit out of character in not getting up and running after ukyo.
It was nice that you combined both the game and the movie but again, if you built it up over some chapters it would of given it a fuller feel to it. although the power that is shown by all the Ranma ½ characters, I would still have the pyramid head rule over them and have more physical strength than them, even the fact that you had kuno do something of use was a change from what he usually was. Overall I like you fic, and write more like these.

it was a good story but you do need some mental help just kidding...but i do have a complant. for one thing ranma would never have frozen or givin up.. ive seen most of the ranma1/2 shows. ryoga is very very strong evern stronger the ranma he would have kill the big guy with the or messed him up real good. mosse is to good with his weapons to be killed. but other wise it was good write more plz.

How about a happy ending next?

This is a good fic, you got the feel of Silent Hill perfectly... And I know which one should be next: The UFO ending (the comedic ending that is extremely random).

I like what you had done with this ending. You took the time to explain motives and reasonings of past events a little at the end which was a plus.

It was dark and interesting. While I wouldn't have liked this as a true ending because it is too dark for my liking and I would want you to show how they are reunited as souls but as an alternative ending, it is fitting.

You have definitely showed quite a bit of consideration about characterization and that is a big plus in my book.

Nice work.

I think I liked the 'Going Home' ending better. Much more satisfying an ending than this one. It also seemed to fit better with the characters.

Pretty good. Nice work.

Wow, that was surprising. It was a good fic and I really enjoyed reading it, enough to make me want to play the game.

Though I have to admit, the fact that Ranma and the crew were shocked frozen by fear so many times during the adventure was annoying (like how they let Ukyo get taken away by Red Pyramid without doing anything to immediately stop it...it was just so unlike Ranma).

I was also pissed off that at the end, Ranma and Akane spoke like they didn't even care that the others died.

Basically, I guess my main complaint is how many times they were shocked into in-action.

When Ukyo saves Ranma and gets taken away, Ranma didn't attempt to save her and did nothing as she was dragged away screaming. Afterwards, he even said Ukyo was dead and immediately wanted to leave. Very un-Ranma-like. When Akane was almost killed by the giant at the merry-go-around, Ranma took action immediately took action. I was tipped off of your biase for Akane at the beginning of the fic but the noticeable amounts of bashing for the other female characters pissed me off (though I guess it wouldn't be obvious to other readers but this is just my opinion).

But overall, the fic was good and I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work.