the story is great i really like it! pretty much nothing was rushed so i really like that! there were some nice sized chapters so i liked that as well anyway the story was great i really liked it!
keep on writing and ill keep reading
Burnup77

erm...dont you think that this whole story is a little too corny not to mention your disasterous spelling mistakes...

definately a favourite!
love how their story is to be girlfriend/boyfriend...
love it!

Aw, that was a surprise for what Artemis did at the end. This story was great! Loved it!

Uh oh, he called her Holly. Someones going to find out that she is up there with Artemis. Great chapter, loved it!

"Well, its not everdaya boy genuis is terrified of his mother just because sheis gonna lecture him about not having girls in his room past bed time."

That quote made me laugh. Great chapter!

A slave? Artemis Fowl a slave? Now here is something to laugh about.

i love it SEQUAL PLEASE

NO! you shou8ld write a sequil to this one!lol...ha ha... but seriously... you should wriote a sequil to this one!

OMG! That was awesome! I wish it had another chapter with Holly and Arty gettin married:( But oh well anyways it was great! 1 question: Why did you make Holly a goth??

Awesome story
I hope you keep writing!

Yay! You're writing again. Whoot!

Great ending! I loved how Artemis and Holly are still joking and sarcastic, even when they're in love. Keep up the great work on other stories!

*sniff* It's over... I really liked the ending though! Thanks!

Lilz

I think using an online thesaurus and manually spellchecking as you type, as well as being a bit clearer as to what is happening(i had to reread at some parts) might really help you in your writing, but besides that, a good plot and an entertaining read.

WOW!
OMG!
it's over!
that was really good...
oh well... all good things must come to an end at some point... right?
anywho...
great job
i'm glad everything turned out alright..
-Zarroc-