Well done!

Very good

Ah, another fine example of your penchant for perfect imagery and a way of describing things that simply flows off one's tongue. I laud your advanced vocabulary! Any chance that you'll be putting the sequel to this one shot up soon?

Touche' Thanks

I really like the characterization of Hermione in your story. She was extremely IC but had this strength in her that wasn't there in the books. Really good. I would love to see more of this characterization of her

loved it! I love the whole harry/hermione dynamic!

Wow. This, and the predecessor story, are compelling, well written, and very enjoyable to read. This series seems somewhat unfinished and additional parts would be eagerly enjoyed. Thank you for sharing your talent.

Good follow up and excellent blackmail scene with Mione's reaction and Snape's interaction too. The ooculemncy bit was wicked, especialy the sense of that memory, it was almost like Harry was giving back some payback but also trying to hold himself together at the same time. Plus Snape's reaction to it was :grins: cool. His thoughts during he experience could not have been better and again his character seemed to effortlessly fit togther. Especially liked Snape's thoughts right after he asked Harry about which defense he used. the bit that started "His green eyes..." it was so angsty and sorrowful and enlightening all at once. And then what followed, with the trembling denial and persistance from him was the best way to end it all. Too bad theres no more of this sort lol :P

LOVE this series! Please post the next part soon!

I realize Snape should stay in-character, but he's still pretty despicable.

HA! Beautifully put in his place! Well written.
I look forward to the third piece in the series.

Ah, this is *good*. I enjoyed the first one immensely.

I just read your "a Season of Cherries" over at Potions and Snitches, and want it for my C2. But you don't have it posted here! Can you?

:)

-Kirinin

For such a short ficlet, that was incredibly powerful. Very well done - my hands are trembling. I read the story twice, and it's terrific. Great stuff.

these are great stories. please keep going with them.

I read both your stories and i like them alot. You should do a story about hermione taking the Occlumency lessons with snape and shows he memories.