that made me sad good job I rarly get sad and you made me sad

Aww so sad! Kinda sweet though. I guess bittersweet is the right term. Anyway, nicely done.

That was so sad! I'm still mad at my friend for when she played CoM and killed off Larxene. She's one of my favorite characters!

Man! That's kinda sad. Good oneshot, though. You get a 4/5!

AAW that it's so0o0o cute!!...though The ending is too sad...

WOW. O_O

Short, but so sweet. *sniffle sob* That was really very sad. You're a great writer, all in all, and you made Larxene seem extremely genuine. I never really considered an Axel/Larxene pairing, but you made it work so nicely. ^_^ Great job!

i just read your other fic, and i liked that one MUCH better
this is very weak to me, I'm having trouble pinpointing specifics though... there's something weak about the structure of the beginning, its not working. The imagery and description is fantastic, you just need to channel these phrases and segments into a more cohesive and connected order, versus what seems like stringing separate thoughts. I will compliment you on your poetic wordings and description, they could just be applied better andd in fewer amounts, that way it isn't as overwhelming.

oh god...*sniff* i love Larxene and Axel, *whimper* and i love them as a pairing...*lip quivers* i swear, i thought this was gonna make me cry...*sniff* poor Larxene DX...*sobs hysterically*

ok oneshot, its sad, maybe i'm missing the whole connection cause i've sadly never played CoM, i read Sora53's fic of it though. It is very pretty and poetic, good job.

Wow...It's so depressing, but so...in Larxene's character. WOW...! *clap* (Yes, I SUCK at giving reviews) ~Luff, Reniti ^_^

OMG I LOVE IT! I honestly felt like crying!

So this was your first story? Wow, it's so sentimental and beautiful! I love it. Man, I should have reviewed this earlier...sorry!! But great job!

*sob sob sob sob sob sob sob sob* Good. The proper grammer felt good XD. I liked it. Write more fanfics!

Very interesting. In my fanfic, Axel and Larxene are going to hate each other. You portrayed it in a different light. Interesting.

By the way, SimplyKairi, Axel isn't dead by the time you get to Larxene. You'd know this if you played CoM or Kingdom Hearts 2. So...sorry to spoil your little ray of sunshine.

Good one. You did a good job writing for someone new to it. Anyways I like it. Can't really find anything wrong with it other then everyone else is doing the same pairing. But still it's pretty good.