Beautiful and strangely, I want to say, tasteful.

I like your analogies (or are they metaphors? I always get them confused. whichever), esp.
"Tender fingers
That seemed to sink into her flesh
Like seeds into a garden"
It's just cool. :)

Marvellous stuff.

Quality. Really.

Very well done.

Really good

aww, that was really good.

I love this. I really do! It was awesome, without getting corny.

I liked this. It was short and sweet, and though written with few words, was full of passion.