this is great. please update soon.

Very good, interesting twist with the FBI agent. All I can say is keep updating!

nice chapter keep up the good work hope you up date soon looking forward to reading more ^^

good so far...can't wait for the next chapter

Awesome chapter and well written keep up the good work and cant wait to read more hope you up date soon pleas

Great! Please update!

That chapter sounds like something that would be in an episode of mutant x! You totally rock... and i really didn't push you to write the chapter... maybe just slapped you over the head a bit lolz.

~Nikko~

Amazing...im waiting on the edge of my chair to read the other chapters!
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GREAT story! I love it!! Please update soon! :)

that was great. would love an update

Bekki :)

can't wait for more! please update soon! :)

Great work...
Please update soon...

Bekki

This is a great story! Can't wait for the next chapter!

I have enjoyed this so far and eagerly await the next chapter! I would love to find out how the story is going to progress as it is starting to sound very interesting.

I don't like the title. But i very much liked the story. it was incredibly well written and clever. Though i wish you had made the torture of one of the Mutant X members rather than some other random person.