Hey I'm Serge, and I am in love with your writing style and alot of your CS fics (just recently got CS and became an immediate addict).

This story is beautifully written and seems to be quite well thought out, though I did have to read it fast since I got through it all in one night!

I am usually patient but I am really really hoping to see the next chapter son! =D

Hopefully, I, myself, might write some CS fiction as well later on, to satisfy my "addiction."

Keep up the good work!

-Serge

Oh man I really want to see this finished! It has the potential to be the best Cave Story fanfic yet, except that it's incomplete. I'm really curious to see where the whole Quote x Misery thing goes. Great job so far!

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-screams-
Well-written, but quite disturbed.
-dashes off giggling pervertedly to read next chapter-

Time for another long winded, praiseful, yet critical review from none other than me! :D

Lemme start with the good, move on through the bad and come to my final conclusion. Another fine chapter which continues the story you're trying to tell. I really enjoyed the fight with Balrog and the subsequent enounter with Quote and Misery, which follows up with things getting darker and darker by the minute.

However, there are a few things which I need to nitpick about. In the beginning there's just something about the writing which doesn't quite grip me as much as the second half of the chapter, it sort of feels like it was written solely so one could progress to the interesting bits, like a bridge.

There's also certain parts which seem a little superflous with no conjoinment to related plot development. I guess it could get away with it when it proves character development, but like I said before, just seems a little superflous.

All in all it was a nice little piece of fiction and I hope you post chapter seven soon. :)

Wow...potent chapter, that. Vivid and emotional is an understatement...0_0

I'm wondering if Curly just got humanized as well. That could be awkward, really.

I feel really sorry for Quote right now. -sighs- Hopefully by the end of this the condition can be reversed.

Fantastic work, and I'm anticipating the next installment.

REVIEW TIEM! LOLOLOLOLOLOL

Now, where should I start? How's about in general, eh? Although this chapter was a bridge between two different important happenings it was the smooth character interactions which carried it nice and easily. It was very entertaining to read, just the right balance of dialogue and description.

Character-wise I continue to enjoy the way you've been writing Curly and for some reason Itoh, but that's because Itoh will always be my favorite character. Your human Quote reminds me a lot of a cross between Vivi from FFIX and Shinji Ikari from Evangelion. Grow an effing spine, Quotie! :D

I'm actually starting to picture Quote with Shinji's voice now. SPIKE SPENCER! And... well... Momorin seems to be enjoying taking care of Quote a little TOO much, if ya know what I mean. Gods, too much internets has corrupted me.

Now I will point out the tiny amount of flaws I found, but don't worry because they're tiny. You used a rather uncommon adjective more than once in short space of time, which made it read a little weird. I think it was 'juvenile'. Another synonym would have helped. Also, there was some tiny bits with a missing... eheh... quote symbol and the lack of a letter in one short word. I can't quite remember which one.

So the next chapter is where it gets REALLY interesting. I expect to see that chapter soon, because I know how much fun you're having writing it. You're a sick lady, Sky, and I'm sick too for anticipating it. ^_^

Now let's have a funeral for the dead mimigas and break for tea and biscuits. *Mourns&Earlgrey*

I hope this review was helpful to you. :)

Well written, good dialogue/relationships etc., good job transferring the excitement of the battles to writing, good job keeping true to the game...

But you get major, major props just for writing about Cave Story.

And this is where it begins to get devillishly interesting. I just feel so sorry for Quote because he has no idea what has happened to him and in essence he was just trying to right the wrong he had made earlier, but this is angsty and that makes it fine by me! ^_^

Curly had better be nice to him now, and I wanna see what happens next. Keep on updating cause your loyal fans await! ^_^

(By the way, I still think the fight scene was awesome. :3)

GASP! Poor guy, now what's he supposed to do? No more jumping and falling down for him.

Anyway, that was well-done. I had no idea that Misery could do that, and it came as a great surprise (since I thought he was going to be a Mimiga and was all, hooray, it's cute fluffy animal time).

I'm assuming that now, aside from previously having been a robot, he has the normal anatomy of the typical male? Or is he still technically genderless?

If not, it's a good thing that this didn't happen back when Kazuma was around.

Nero is such a cute name for a dragon. Did he fiddle while Rome burned? Or ROM? My CDs were forged from dragon's breath itself...

But forgive my ramblings. ^_^ KAZUMA! He's gone to a better place, but hopefully not in chunks. He went to creepy man heaven where there are lots of shota robots to look at. Quote is back! Will he kick ** like he used to, or will Curly continue to run the show? I shall tune in next time to discover the answer!

Keep writing! Evil must flow...

"I kinda knocked him unconscious..."
Nice line, quite nice. Might put it on my quotes list. No pun intended.

The beginning was a little weak, but it might just have seemed that way to me since I was too busy wanting to strangle Kazuma or something for being so gay, but at the gunsmith it hopped back up to the fluid work that you're so good at producing.

Nice work, and I still await more. You have re-inspired me to pick up my fics again.

You did the scene where Curly broke perfectly. It was a bit of a jolt, with me remembering her as the spunky little robot who whips out a big-** machine gun and starts shooting me, and now seeing her crying. Talk about pent-up emotion.

This is going to be incredible, I can tell. A kerzillion Gaudis against a kerzillion of Doctor Fusa-something's minions. Like BW0 said, this needs to practically take up an entire chapter. Epicness should be the word of the day for the final conflict.

But I look forward to seeing Curly meet up with the Hermit. Too bad she can't get the spur. Unless did Quote have the courtesy to return the Polar Star before he left?

Even if this chapter was mostly setting-up for the rest of the story I enjoyed it in my own way. I liked the scene where Curly was introduced as their leader. Let's hope she's strong enough to rise to the challenge. My one little criticism in this chapter is that Curly seems a little too prone to crying, especially for somebody inclined to being strong, but she DID lose a hell of a lot over the course of the game/fic, so that's understandable.

And the doctor is awful. He could have used that mimiga for something, anything, but he'd prefer to kill it for the sake of killing it, eh? I wonder what caused the doctor to be evil in the first place? Does he have justification for being an **?

I wanna see huge fights worthy of LOTR! Blader Gaudi squadrons wiping out waves of mimigas! Blood and killing! Curly the amazon warrior! Keep on writing, this is beginning to get hella good. ^_^

Very cool story. Keep it up!

You captured the pain of loss perfectly when Semi died. You might want to change her name though; I almost laughed at the name.

"Hi my name's Semi and I'm a truck!"

Either that or I'm just exceedingly hyperactive today. Write on!

Interesting idea for a fic! I hope you update soon...