|Reviews for In the Shadow of my Father|
| MrsMosley 8/7/06 . chapter 10
That was worth the wait. What a great chapter!
| calsax 8/7/06 . chapter 10
Dang, you made me cry. And that's not something I admit to lightly. The revelations between Clark and Jason are so well done. My admiration for Superman/Clark increased a hundred fold through this chapter. Yes, he made mistakes, but what a pure heart that guy has. I can't believe he considered it selfish to want to spend time with Lois under the pretense of being Clark Kent. Just, wow! Amazing writing and I'm looking forward to the next update.
| carolinesegment 8/7/06 . chapter 10
That was so touching that I am completely speechless. I'm fairly certain that I will be smiling for several hours because of this. Thank you. I've had very few reasons to smile lately.
| Kala Lane-Kent 8/7/06 . chapter 10
Aw, Alphie. I stopped reading for a bit because it just hurt so much...but... God, this was great. Jason seemed so real in this chapter, especially. I think you nailed this amazingly. And I absolutely can't wait to see what happens next. I've gone back and read the chapters I missed. I really do love this. :)
And thank you for those notes you gave me a month back. Your notes were what got Little Secrets going and I'll always be grateful.
| Paige242 8/7/06 . chapter 10
Well, this is officially the first story that has really made me cry. This chapter was so amazing...I...wow...I'm still choked up. I'll admit- My expectations were high (and I was checking for updates all day) but I never could have anticipated something this great. Just when I think you can't write a better chapeter, you do. Wow.
I can't wait for more.
| Calendar 8/7/06 . chapter 10
Oh, wow. You had me bawling my eyes out. It's so PERFECT. Poor Jason and Clark, waiting so long to get all this out in the open. But I suppose they'll have the rest of their lives to get it better!
| IrishKat 8/7/06 . chapter 10
I gotta say it... you were right. At first, Kate bugged me but since then she's really gone up in my eyes. Anyway, I really loved this chapter. Nobody fell at each others feet, instead there was a mutual 'Oh, I get it'. And I loved how it turns out that Supe listened to every performance (except the one). I can just imagine him floating in space, blissed out on his son's music.
| heartnut 8/7/06 . chapter 10
*sigh* What a *nice* bedtime chapter. Oh, I LOVE you. *hug*
You have *no* idea how much I needed to read something like this. Like, I have been so down lately because of something going on in my real life, and you helped me calm down and escape for a bit. This chap made me tear up a bit... no tears flowing freely quite yet, but I hold out hope for them.
You know, this is almost a perfect ending point, but I have a feeling you are going to develop the rest of the story a bit. I hope you have a nice ending for us...
The entire chapter was glorious. All the dialogue was spot-on, I loved every word that was written for Clark's dialogue. The stuff about going to Jason's recitals and games was a great personal touch. It's the little things that you add in to the mix that makes it so much more interesting. I really admire your talent for those details-they make the story stand out among the other stories that are out there. I'm really happy and proud of you for taking this story so very far and making it so believable. It's really a rare treat to read such good writing for no charge.
I'm looking forward to the rest of the story... if there is more? :) Take care!
| A. Mulholland 8/7/06 . chapter 9
Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant.
| LimitedMage 8/5/06 . chapter 9
Wow. This is amazing. It's been a long while since I read such a good fanfic, or any other piece of fiction for that matter. I love the way you write Jason, and I hope I can write him as well as you do in my own fic. I love the way you write, please continue soon!
| Barbossa'sApples 8/5/06 . chapter 9
I LOVE this so far! It's amazing! I can't wait for more!
| imtweetybird 8/4/06 . chapter 9
beautiful story. very interesting and different relationship between superman/clark and jason. can't believe i only found your story today.
| 12 Withering Roses 8/4/06 . chapter 9
Just wanted to say that I liked this chapter. Nice cilffie. Truly evil of you. Kinda like me. Only I always end each chapter with a cliffie. Anyways, keep up the amazing writing. Can't wait to read more.
| eleanor44 8/4/06 . chapter 9
I think i've never reviewed this story (i'm ashamed :() but i wanted to say that i really like it, it's different from the other fan fics you can find here and the story is so good, same with the characters that i couldn't stop reading when i found about it. I'm not an expert on superheroes but your fic Breaking the Routine hooked me on the Superman world and for that i have to thank you ;)
Anyway, i hope you don't forget about The Lion and The Lamb, i need a dosis of that story too, especially when i still have to wait long time till i get New Moon.
Have a great time ;)
| ljp 8/3/06 . chapter 9
aw. how sweet