Where did you go? Please update soon.

Monster:minitor

Description: black, brown or dark grey with axes or mallets as wepons. It looks like a bull but stands on its hind legs, it is taller than a man with two horns sticking out of the sides of its head.

You are a good writer but there is one mistake in your writing. Arianna has blue eyes not brown, but other than that it is all good. keep writing im looking forward to your chapter

This is so cool. Please keep wrighting!

Please continue

Um excuse me but didn't Rednal die in one of the last two books...?

This is really good. i love the unicorn of ballior (can't spell) series. i have only read up to no. 8.

Keep up the good work.

Don't worry i love this story please write more soon its very good!

Not bad. It wasn't rushed too terribly bad. If I have any ideas I will let you know!

Yeah it was fast but it is still good. A little LOTR if you ask me. But that is just fine.

This good. it is a little fast pace but it is not too bad. One thing is that reigns is actually spelled reins. Keep writing!

This sounds like it is going to be good. Just one thing; it sounded like it was a bit rushed. other than that it was was good so keep writing!