in a word? Powerful.

This could be cool, if you explore this. It almost sounds like he thinks his dreams are reality and his reality is a dream. If that's true, he really is crazier than I thought.

Ohhhhhhhh! Wow! That was Wow!

Wow. Thats good! I wish I could write like that.

How dare you flame Eliza! She's a nice person and a good writer! I LOVE her stories. So what they may be Mary Sue-ish, but who gives a darn? >_

I am trying to make a point of reviewing stories of people who have reviewed mine. It only seems fair. I like this poem. The imagery is disturbing...appropriately so. There is a nice flow to the words, it is somewhat halting and jittery which is exactly what Tom must be feeling. Nicely done.

Wow, that was really into it 'n stuff. I screamed when it said "I screamed." Hehe, I'm like that though. Maybe it's just me. Now ya'll don't go thinkin' lil' ol' me'z all crazy, 'k? Good! BTW, awesome fic! ~ Ice Princess

Wow, you're so good at poetry...Of course I will read *all* your series!!! ;)

your ending is the definition of chilling. i think i had a shiver running up my spine. i'm not one for poetry, but this was really amazing :O)

That is really COOL! AWESOME! ROCK ON, MAN! I will be sure to read your series.

That was excellent, with an effective rhythm and ending. Ah, Tom Riddle... or was it Voldemort?

Ooh. I love the way you write. Gosh darn it, this was *really* good, and I can't wait for the fic to be updated.

that wqas um... interesting

Gaaah! My title!! It was in Bold, and Font Size 14!! What happened?? Waaaaaah!! ::Bangs fists on floor in toddler-like way:: It looked fine in its HTML form. What oh what have I done wrong now?? ::Whacks head off monitor several times in quick succession:: Ah well, you live, you learn. Next time lucky!

So good . . . I love it. Especially the way you ended it. The last line had so much impact because of how unexpected it is. If you are really obsessed with writing Tom Riddle poetry, I hope to see more of it up here. It's too bad that you won't be posting the next part of "Blood and Fire" soon. But that's okay. Quality over quantity. I know, the saying isn't exactly appropriate, but you get my point . . . right?