I really like how this one played out. Good job!

lol this was awesome!!
i really liked this :D

You are such an excellent writer! I love this and your other JouxKai fics. the characterization is great, and your metaphors (similes? analogies? whatever theyre called) make me laugh. keep on writing ygo fics, please!!

I'm a total fangirl. Will you marry me? ^^

Seriously, you write some excellent Jou and Kaiba fics. I think I love every single one of them. Not kidding. Usually, a fic that doesn't have a bunch of dialogue might bore the hell out of me (because I'm just simple like that), but not your fics. They happen to be interesting enough and well written enough to grab my attention. Lovely fic! You write quite well...I'm very oddly satisfied after reading this and your other fics...they're just so complete and rounded. Wonderful.

one words even it doesn't make sense "Sweet" ^_^

(if you don't understand what I mean it mean just e-mail me about it)

I love this story i love your writting style^_^ SxJ plushies for you. ^0^

Holy **.

This is a DAMN good story. I mean, really, insanely good. I loved Joey's character, his voice was so strong, yet so effortlessly smooth. Great job with diction--you chose the most perfect words.

And (please don't mind the fangirl in me) that moment between them was HAWT! XD

I love how you write these two! Hope you write more!

wow that was really hot

and completely plasible. which was the best part.
i love these internal thoughts w/ actions spoken inside his mind

beautiful. rock out loud fic as usual. very dicriptive, and i like the way you get into Juonouchi's head so easily. for a JouKai shonenai it was spectacularly IC. but again that is what you do most of the time. Glowing praise. bows in appreciation of good fic.
-Novelist.

Good.

I liked that.

Wow, a really in character Jou-centric fic you've got! :D I really liked it! Whoot whoot! And you wrote it so interesting as well! Brilliant!