 KittyCaesar 2009-08-08 . chapter 1I really like how this one played out. Good job! |
 ONIX-21 2008-05-12 . chapter 1lol this was awesome!!
i really liked this :D |
 dormitos 2008-02-16 . chapter 1You are such an excellent writer! I love this and your other JouxKai fics. the characterization is great, and your metaphors (similes? analogies? whatever theyre called) make me laugh. keep on writing ygo fics, please!! |
 Cissa DeLancome 2007-06-01 . chapter 1I'm a total fangirl. Will you marry me? ^^ |
 Carthage 2007-01-19 . chapter 1Seriously, you write some excellent Jou and Kaiba fics. I think I love every single one of them. Not kidding. Usually, a fic that doesn't have a bunch of dialogue might bore the hell out of me (because I'm just simple like that), but not your fics. They happen to be interesting enough and well written enough to grab my attention. Lovely fic! You write quite well...I'm very oddly satisfied after reading this and your other fics...they're just so complete and rounded. Wonderful. |
 tk 2006-11-28 . chapter 1 one words even it doesn't make sense "Sweet" ^_^
(if you don't understand what I mean it mean just e-mail me about it) |
 Chibi-the-small 2006-10-29 . chapter 1I love this story i love your writting style^_^ SxJ plushies for you. ^0^ |
 Black Poe 2006-09-06 . chapter 1 Holy **.
This is a DAMN good story. I mean, really, insanely good. I loved Joey's character, his voice was so strong, yet so effortlessly smooth. Great job with diction--you chose the most perfect words.
And (please don't mind the fangirl in me) that moment between them was HAWT! XD
I love how you write these two! Hope you write more! |
 Girl of Grace 2006-07-14 . chapter 1 wow that was really hot
and completely plasible. which was the best part.
i love these internal thoughts w/ actions spoken inside his mind |
 crazy novelist-san 2006-07-10 . chapter 1beautiful. rock out loud fic as usual. very dicriptive, and i like the way you get into Juonouchi's head so easily. for a JouKai shonenai it was spectacularly IC. but again that is what you do most of the time. Glowing praise. bows in appreciation of good fic.
-Novelist. |
 Princess Shela 2006-07-09 . chapter 1Good. |
 Aya Kurayami 2006-07-09 . chapter 1I liked that. |
 Growing Pain 2006-07-09 . chapter 1Wow, a really in character Jou-centric fic you've got! :D I really liked it! Whoot whoot! And you wrote it so interesting as well! Brilliant! |