Very good story and I think a sequel would be a very good idea.

Can I vote for a sequeal ...please

I did enjoy this. Haha. Mushy ending.

- Jun

You have become more lazy with this story,but I honestly do NOT care. Oh. My. Gosh. I love it! I'm a critic on and I reflexively give hard critiques. When I say I love this...I really do.

I'm new to this pairing,and have read a couple of other fanfics. All with Azula being this muscle-thing ugh! Its so cheesy and unrealistic. She's a woman,not a man. Clearly,in the show she is not flat chested. Clearly,thanks to the episode "The Beach" she has all the desired curves every woman wants to achieve.

She isn't a man. She's a lean beautiful - no very gorgeous (im no **)- woman.

Her being 19 or 20 in this book isn't bad either. :D Sokka is like 20 or 21,I guess.

Enough detail in lemons - not bad, not great.

That was cute, a little cliche but still cute.

- Jun

Are you kidding me? I think that you have written this very well. Azula is completely in character, I just hope that if/when you write a lime that you don't make her with huge man muscles.

Sokka,Gah - typical. A bit more masculine and mature in this fic.

- Jun

amazing.

good story are you doing the sequel

All I can say is WOW, great story. I loved every bit of it and to be honest the way you ended it I would love to see a contiuation of the story.

This is a very great story. Cannot wait for the sequel!

I really wish you would do the sequel...

So you should totally do the sequel =33 I loved this story it's one of the few amazingly written Sokkla fics out there and I'm sure everyone would love it

This is by far the best fanfiction I have ever read. Your writing is amazing and I hope that you continue this story.

You know, I read this fic ages ago, but for some reason, didn't review. So, you'll get a slightly longer one instead.

The bad parts are the rather cliché captive-drama setup, and the little "twist" at the ending. Some words are also misused or misspelled.

The good parts are all the other ones. I like their spar and the dancing in particular. The line, "It must be raining," is also a favourite, as it expresses their closeness with what they know about each other. Or what he knows about her, in any case.

While it doesn't seem likely, a sequel would be interesting, to see what would change in the rest of the series. Not to mention, the end. Feel free to drop a line if you want to.

Write the sequel. Write it NOW! So well written and very descriptive.