aww...i like the locket part. that was cute n nice. it would be nice if they showed some affection 4 each other. like a hug or i love you kid or ur the best bro in the world even a kiss on the cheek would do fine. Werid but understandalbe. n i can't wait 4 the next chapter! please update! this is juss aww! ; )

Heyy I really like this story, it rocks! Please update it! Please?

Yay! Another good chapter! I stayed up 45 min. past my bed time to read this one and I'm glad I was not disappointed. :P

Ou... I liked this chapter. It was really long. @.@ Your efforts showed though. POOR MOKUBA! =(

Wow, that was really well written and believable. You've caught my attention so I'm onto the next chapter! :)

Very interesting. But then again, I just love those cute Kaiba boys.

I LIKE this fic.
I admit, it wasn't what I was looking for when I set out-- but it is better than I had hoped to find, and I'm glad this is what I clicked on. Non-romance that's as worth reading as this is hard to dig up. ^_^

I also like how you managed to make Mokuba a very -teenaged- Mokuba without changing who he is, or pulling any of the silly over-dramatic "lol Mokuba's a cutting drug-and-sex addict who hates his brother and shows it by sleeping with Miss Mary Sue!" plots. You do the same for Seto, too, which makes me -very- happy-- I've seen Seto written wildy OOC too often to not appreciate it when he's written well.

Thank you for writing such a good fic, and I hope to see more of it soon.

I really love this story. Especially the idea. It's really cool how Mokuba's all grown up. I'm making a fanfic also, but i'm kinda nervous to do so. I hope you read it (even if it's not as good as yours!);-)

Fan of your fanfic,
Lindsey (setolover12255)

Thanks so much for the updates. I haven't been able to update mine lately due to the wait that I have to endure from my beta.

Anyway, I love this chapter. Mokuba is becoming such a powerful figure here and I can certainly understand where Mokuba is coming from. I can understand Seto's POV as well. I'm the oldest of three so I can see where Mokuba has his troubles.

Very well written! I'm going to read the next chapter, which I really look forward to reading. XD

I really like this story.. It shows how hard it is to grow up when you are the younger brother of someone who is really important and all you want is a life of your own... Mokie is growing up and I really think that he will make his brother proud of him.. Please update when you can..

I guess it really must be a bummer to be the brother of one of the richest men in the world and have to live in his shadow...I can't really blame Mokie for wanting a life of his own and then I can't blame Seto for wanting to protect his brother... I hope that this plan might reunite them again...

WOW!!I think that Mokie is in a little bit of trouble. ha ha...For someone so young he has already gotten in more trouble then anyone that I know...

this is the best fanfic ever! i'm totally obsessed w/ it! hope u write more soon.

I really like this story; I always thought that Mokuba would 1 day grow up like that. Update soon!

Wow, that's impressive. I really like the flow of this story!! I think you have a good idea going here. I can understand Kaiba's demeanor a great deal. I can see him coming unglued at the sheer stupidity that his little brother is exhibiting.

Great job!!