FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination
| FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| Zuzanny 2008-07-25 ch 26,  | abuseI'm glad Jack came to back Daniel/Harry up. :) |
| starjems88 2008-07-25 ch 26, | abuseplease update soon:) |
| Anime Monster 2008-07-23 ch 26, | abuseI love how you threw in the "in the neighborhood" joke at the end. I love this story and eagerly await the next update. |
| Michael Weyer 2008-07-23 ch 26, | abuseSorry I've missed reviewing the last few chapters. Your explanation for how Voldemort survived was very inventive and makes a twisted sense. I really like how the last few chapters have answered the question of why Daniel/Harry never used magic before with SG-1. And his talk with Jack was a great scene, empahsizing the friendship they have and it's good of Jack being so understanding. Can't wait to see more. |
| Isis the Sphinx 2008-07-23 ch 26, | abuseNot bad, a good recap chap. Keep writing! |
| WhiteElfElder 2008-07-22 ch 26, | abuseNice update after so long. I liked this chapter and I liked the touches where Daniel/Harry recounted his time with Ron's sister. |
| AlMcpherson 2008-07-07 ch 25, | abuseNice chapter... But about the sam/Daniel thing, I'm looking forward to your explanation for Sam's shift in feelings, if you will, and as mentioned, Jack not seeming to even try to chase Carter, now that he has no direct connection to her (and regs are a bit more blurry for them) |
| RL Seward 2008-06-21 ch 15, | abuse; the American wizard population mainly consists of those witches and wizards who resented some of the restrictions in the British wizarding world.” That doesn't make sense. We know from the Quiddich World Cup that many races and ethnicities have a wizarding community. It is unreasonable to assume that Bulgarian Wizards, Irish Wizards, etc wouldn't emigrate to the States. How do you figure that there would be no wizards born on the worlds that the SG teams visit? Even if there is no organized methods of training them, they should still be there. The only way they couldn't be producing mudblood offspring is if there is something unique to Earth that stimulates the magic gene. |
| John the visionary 2008-06-19 ch 25, | abuseALRIGHT! You finally got Jack O'Neill in this. Now I can't wait to see your next chapter. Bye! |
| WhiteElfElder 2008-06-19 ch 25, | abuseOh boy, Jack may have defended him against the IOA, but that is because he hates politicians...however, I think Danny is about to get it with both barrels. This is getting very, very interesting now. Keep it coming! |
| Isis the Sphinx 2008-06-19 ch 25, anon. | abuseJACK! Jackjackjackjackjackjack! Woot! Anyways... Nice chappie. Bloody red tape. Tis annoying. Keep writing! |
| RL Seward 2008-06-19 ch 6, | abuseThe only problem with this story is that we have met Daniel's grandfather. Interesting concept about Voldy having a gouuald |
| Wings90 2008-06-19 ch 25, | abuseOh, good chapter! :) I like it that you don't make Woolsey out to be a complete idiot - he's a little short-sighted, but he wants to do the right thing and he can be reasoned with. I'm really looking forward to the Jack / Daniel chat... :D |
| RL Seward 2008-06-18 ch 2, | abuseSo Daniel is supposed to be Harry, huh? When one thinks of how many times he coulde have secretly Aparated to save the day...You're going to have to address that. |
| Anime Monster 2008-06-18 ch 25, | abuseYAY! JACK! Daniel isn't the only one that hates politics and bureaucracy. I personally love these types of chapters. Well I hope you begin the conversation as soon as possible and update :P Love this story! |