That was interesting. Poor Harry. Update soon.

excellent work

So very neat this here is. Harry is acting very mature

Aw that was nice. :)

*shudders* i hate slashy fluff WARN A GUY NEXT TIME

I like it poor Harry with all those burns - ouch!, at least Draco Malfoy got detentions

This was a very nice story, I enjoyed it immensely. As for the "eloquence" of the speech... Teenagers can use proper articulate language in conjunction with slang. Just because Harry and Ron don't use it that often doesn't mean they can't. I have seen other stories that bring up this issue, but not in such detail. I know this is one of the partial reasons for Prof. Snape's tendency for negative behavior towards Harry that has been speculated amongst Harry Potter fans. That's one of my favorite things about the professor's speech--his tends to be quite similar to mine sometimes. Sometimes, I get picked at about it and othertimes I am told they like the way I speak. :P If I may ask; what do you guys like about Prof. Snape? Erm, I apologize for the extremely long, detailed, and rambling review. But your story was awesome and you kept the characterization accurate as the situation called for.

awesome!

this ie a cool story. you left to were you cood ad more to it. i think you should. cause it would be asome.

This is a good one. It's genuinely good. It's slightly origional, too - I've read others like this, but nothing quite as good as this one was. Good job.

great two-shot!! love the interaction between severus and harry. keep up the work!!



Ja Ne ~FOXANBU~

Er why were they talking so out in the open?
Slightly sweet this one was if unsual

I like the idea, but Harry and Ron suddenly became super eloquent in their speech. Kind of OOC.

I hope you do another installation of this. I really like what you have so far.

Awesome! Does it stop there? I think this could somehow, if you had a plot, turn into Snape mentors Harry. Hey, it could happen. :P haha

x damato