aw,its over,u r mean, i was so looking forward to reading more,lol,i absolutly loved this story, it was so,...so,..., oh my god, i can only think of oh my god to describe how i feel about the story,i was saying all throughout the story,almost every chapter,lol,
i like ur imagination too ;), i cant beleive the story is over now.

all i can say is,omg,OH MY GOD!

This story was awsome! You should right a sequal of what happens next! Cause you kinda left it hanging there.

OMG! I loved that story. I'm actually glad that it's not really really sad at the end like some other stories I've read, but it still made tears come to my eyes. Keepe up the good work hiei1317!

Wow.. it's actually complete! Wow. It seems very sudden. Beautiful nonetheless. Beautiful!

AH only 4 chapters left! MORE!

saw your author's note in the next chapter and just HAD to come back and post a review. GO YOU WHO! You rock my SOCKS!

yay! review time! Your story is absolutely wonderful!

*wipes eyes* Oh man, that was so beautiful, and the ending was perfect...and they will always be together. *sobs* Love this and you

serious ooc, man.

the last bit, about kisame telling itachi's past, sounds too much like he's narrating it.

Wow you done good girl, it's been awhile (and I'm sorry for that) but it was a great thing you know. It's so nostalgic seeing the counter I remember when the Ist chapter whent up and there where more chapters than reveiws!
-D

Wow. That story was so different and individual in every way. You should think about
getting a story published. Seriously you are an amazing writer.

last chap? goes emo- well least u didnt kill danna. loved this story, been reading since chap5, though i dont think i ever put an alert on it.

One-tailed... Gaara... Sasori fights with HER... don't you dare kill him! Please! I like your story it's really awsome! Update!