"That was because neither of them had heard the fully unedited version."

That line alone made me burst out laughing, which is something that rarely happens when i read most fanfictions. For a second i though you were going to go back on what you said in previous chapters...

Anyway, had to mention that. i really do love this story, and your writing style. I noticed a few gramatical errors here and there, but nothing so glaring that it took away from the story. Speaking of that you're very good at painting a picture of the emotional state between the two of them. You make it easy to comprehend what they are feeling, and in so much detail i could imagine anyone thinking how they do. Bravo!

I honestly couldn't believe it when I saw an update for this Fanfic! I'm so glad you decided to do an Epilogue cause I had always wondered what their first date would have been like. I can't get enough of Ryoga and Ukyo and this was one of my favorite fanfics, really, amazing story. =)

This is one of those fanfics that you can call perfect. Very good job.

I love it. This is fanfic gold, thanks for finishing it.

Oh, and let me tell you something, your kiss scenes are so... vivid and detailed, they're great! I mean, you actually made me remember some of the times I've been kissed by the way you described them!

Hello. It's nice to see you finishing up all these old fanfictions. I'd read this story up to the fourth chapter before, and I thought that although most of the problems were solved, it still felt like something was left hanging. But this epilogue seems to be the end of the story, and so I'm happy.

I like that the date ended up being a disaster because, let's face it, no one in the Ranma universe is allowed to have a normal date. But I also began to feel that it was bad luck that bound Ukyo and Ryoga together in a strange sort of way. Their relationship began with bad luck: the whole cursed tunnel. But, ironically, instead of tearing them apart, it brings them closer together.

On the whole the story very thoroughly dissected the characters feelings for each other. It was psychologically complex and dramatic, but there were some funny moments as well. I especially liked the part on the train where Ranma was throwing bread at Ryoga and their game of truth and dare. Ranma having his own bras was quite a nice gem. If there was one complaint I had it was that the descriptions of the characters feelings between the dialogues did start to feel a little long and there were a few times when I would have preferred to be a little more grounded in the scene instead of in the character's heads (for example when Ryoga and Ukyo are both thinking of Ranma). On the other hand, I can't complain too much because it's being in the character's heads that's so enticing in the first place, and these things never bothered me to the point where I'd stop reading.

So in conclusion, it was an excellent story. Thanks for finishing it. :)

I couldn't believe my own eyes when I saw the update. Still it was worth the wait! Love it to bits. And yeah the dogs were definitely a Ranmaverse thing. Good to hear from you again! Their first kiss always gets me. I had to reread the entire story all over again, just because I wanted to ;)

Heh, sex is nice, but no need to see it in every situation, especially with these two. Besides, them trying that in a tree in those conditions would have only ended up with Ryouga face-down as a piglet with a concusion and being a doggie treat. Thank you for wrapping this one up. It wa snice to see what had happened with them in the "After-time".

I know that Drakken and shego are your interest these days, but is there a chance that you might be going to write more on "Proximics" at some point?

Happy and sad.

Happy because this was a great way to end this story. Normally I strongly dislike Ryoga/Ukyo fanfiction: yours are the only versions of that pairing that I have ever enjoyed. You find ways of making the two characters into a plausible couple without making them wildly out of character.

Sad, because I fear we won't be seeing another Ranma story from you in the future. I hope I'm wrong.

=O an epilogue!!

hey, they had a pretty exciting first date!!
aw that was really sweet! very great job!
I loved this fic!!

However late it may be, it is still quite entertaining. I await your next work.

i'm really enjoying this story so far! hope you update SOON!!

and not to worry. summer ukyo/ryoga romance with lotsa smooching is LOVE anyway... =)

nice, but doesn't ryoga have a dog?

I'm GLAD GLAD that you're going to have an epilogue cause the story is kinda hanging. I think that you have portrayed Ryouga and Ukyo's character well. I think they're such a good couple. Your story really is one of the best i've read so far.. ^^

GAH, i love this istory so far, UPDATE PLEASE

Excellent story; definitely one of the best Ryoga/Ukyo ones I've read. I do hope you get around to the Epilogue at some point but, if not, I've enjoyed what there is very much.