nice, but doesn't ryoga have a dog?

I'm GLAD GLAD that you're going to have an epilogue cause the story is kinda hanging. I think that you have portrayed Ryouga and Ukyo's character well. I think they're such a good couple. Your story really is one of the best i've read so far.. ^^

GAH, i love this istory so far, UPDATE PLEASE

Excellent story; definitely one of the best Ryoga/Ukyo ones I've read. I do hope you get around to the Epilogue at some point but, if not, I've enjoyed what there is very much.

My absolute fave of Ry/Uk stories. Ever. ♥

*sighs with giddiness* i read this for the billionth time just now, but i only comment now because it's the only time i got an account. ^^

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Greetings:

I'm a very big fan of Ryoga/Ukyo fics, and of your fics especially. I just want to say this is another great work from you and I'm dying to see the epilogue. Keep up the great work.

Sincerely,

The Red Jaguar.

This is the most adorable thing ever to exist in the history of the universe.

...Okay, that may be a slight exaggeration, but the point is, I loved it. It was remarkably true to the characters, while at the same time allowing them to grow and develop. You mentioned the eventual existence of an epilogue? *looks hopeful*

That was so cute I could just cry! I think that was my favorite fic of this pairing ever, so congrats!

YAY. This is such a cute story! I was craving a believable Ry/Uk romance (non-epic) quick fix. This definitely hit the spot. Don't stop writting. You are awesome!

You raise the bar high for sensitive characterization, not only of your main characters, Ryoga and Ukyo, but also of Ranma and Akane (whose relationship you definitely depict as they are in the manga as opposed to the more raucous anime variant).

I really enjoy your stories, so I really feel a bit mean to point out a rather blatant continuity error here in chapter two. About three-quarters of the way through, after Ukyo and Ryoga reach Ryoga's house, "he went through his entire backpack to find a set of keys" and shortly thereafter "He asked apprehensively, shouldering his backpack". This wouldn't happen to be the backpack that Ryoga lost back in the cave, forcing him to depend on Ukyo to pay for his train/bus fare home, would it?

Ryoga could be looking for the spare house key under stones in the front walk or something like that, so the backpack should not be vital to the scene, and given that its absence is a fairly major plot point earlier on, perhaps a minor rewrite is in order here.

As long as I am wearing my black hat, I will point out that one
"looks askance", not "looks in askance", as you have here (and in chapter 6 of Omiyage). From the rhythm of "in askance", I think you may be under the mistaken impression that askance's accent is on the first syllable or that the word has something to do with the verb "ask".

Allow me to reiterate that I really like this story, and add my vote to those who have expressed a desire to see things go on for more than the four delightful chapters so far. Thank you!

OMG... I LOVE THIS FIC! Omg.. omg.. omg... ok I have to stop with the OMG's... it's just this is so awesome!!

I love it, can't wait to read the next chappie!!

An original fanfic. well done.

Excellent chapter, I really like how you made this chapter seem like those summer romance stories you read every so often, yet most of them aren't that interesting. Well this story is.

I do wonder, in this story, is Akari ever going to be mentioned, considering it's the finale, I didn't think so, but even if it was only a sentence long, it would still be cool to see her.

Thank you for this wonderful chapter, I am looking forward to the Epilogue soon.

Ruto Kuntai

*Squee!* I'm glad that you updated!! I liked Ukyou's reaction too. I think I would be upset at first if I found out I was dating P-chan. Not so much because of the curse...but because it meant he'd been sleeping with Akane, even if it was in piggy form. XD