cute little story.

Good job! One thing I noticed was that at the beginning you use 'he was aware' twice really close together, which makes it awkward to read. Other than that, structure was perfect. I liked the inside little thoughts of what was making him sad- that was really good.

KrisEleven~

AWW! Jasons SO cute!

I was going to review to the other story, But for some reason it wouldn't let me... :(

bye bye! :)

your little sis, crusnik

GAH! How do you do this? I love these fics of yours. LOVE THEM. And you put Jason on his lap saying he wants to grow up like Superman... pull at my heart strings why don't you!

Again, that is the cuteness. I loved it. Poor Clark.

Those two get along so well!

Aw, you did one from Clark's pov. Adorable. Loved the "Fearless Reporter Jason White" line. So very cute. m:)

I just read your Richard POV on this and this one was just as good. Now I'm hooked! Please, continue!

Oh, I love this one, too! You put such great details into your stories, like the idea that when Clark kissed Lois to erase her memory of his duel-identity, he erased so much that she can only describe him as "Just Clark." And then there's Jason's comment about growing up to be both a reporter and Superman. And the ending was absolutely beautiful! *dies of happiness*

SEQUEL?

This series is so good!

“Just for once, for this moment, he’s not going to be invisible.”

Great line. I enjoyed this story immensely. There are some terrific insights into Clark’s struggles with a dual existence. My heart broke at how he longs for a family, something he thinks he can’t have.

Your characterizations in the “The Little Things” series are all spot-on, and it’s impressive how you capture these moments in their lives so well. I’m off to read the next installment in this series! :-)

Bittersweet is the only word that comes to mind even though it doesn't even begin to cover the range of emotions caused by this story. I think this is favorite of the Little Thing series, because Clark is just so--I don't even have a word for it I just know that he is. And you are an amazing writer who has mastered the language of raw emotion.

I loved it. I like how you showed Clark's loneliness. Wonderfully powerful portrayal.

Gunn

Oh-my-freaking-goodness... You are brilliant - brilliant, I say!

Just when I thought, you couldn't tug any more at my heartstrings, here you are with this absolutely sweetly poignant story and doing so. I am flabbergasted!