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| golden-phoenix20 2008-07-14 ch 1, | abusereally good. was under pen name goldenshadows but had to change my account!! |
| hellioness 2008-04-07 ch 12, | abuseI just stumbled across this gem of a fic. Loved the emo. Loved the scares. Loved that all 3 Winchesters we briefly reunited. This story is going on my rec list: /fanfiction/fanfiction-picks/ |
| girlfan1979 2008-03-09 ch 12, | abusePretty cool story. Thank you for sharing. |
| Debbie C 2008-01-21 ch 12, anon. | abuseGreat Story. This one is good enough to be an episode. Heart twisting ending... sniff! |
| tanpopo no hana 2008-01-21 ch 12, | abuseBitter sweet ending, but I liked it. Thanks for writing! |
| tanpopo no hana 2008-01-21 ch 11, | abuseNice mother who passes something cursed on to her daughter... poor Linda. She really didn't deserve to die like that... |
| tanpopo no hana 2008-01-21 ch 10, | abuseThanks for all your replies! And sorry it took me so long to get back to this - I was away for the weekend. I really don't think this is a bad story (otherwise I probably wouldn't review). Don't beat yourself up over anything - it's really well written! What I noticed about this chapter was that you sort of changed their past though. In the show the boys don't know who Missouri is until they meet her in 'home'. But that's your author's right of course... and I really liked the ice-cream story :o) So, did Linda do all this to get a "son" back into her house? |
| tanpopo no hana 2008-01-18 ch 9, | abuseWell that would at least explain Linda's weird behaviour. But why would she summon this wraith at all? Now I'm really curious...! |
| tanpopo no hana 2008-01-18 ch 7, | abuseWow, John's back? That sure is a surprise! At first I thought it was Sam, that maybe the attack on Dean triggered his memories. But John's good, too :o) That should be an interesting conversation... |
| tanpopo no hana 2008-01-18 ch 4, | abuseI think Linda's reaction is really weird. I mean, isn't it to be expected that someone would come looking for Sam? Why would she automatically want to call the police? Missouri wasn't that threatening, was she? |
| tanpopo no hana 2008-01-18 ch 3, | abuseHuh, hope that Bed-and-Breakfast woman isn't going to hide him or something. But I have to say, Missouri could have been a little less scary on the phone... |
| tanpopo no hana 2008-01-18 ch 2, | abuseOh god, poor Dean. I can practically feel his heartache oozing out of the screen... Beautifully written, really. |
| RedDragen 2007-09-16 ch 12, | abuseI liked the story |
| Jensen 2007-06-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseI've been reading all your Supernatural stories and I have to say that they are all totally fantastic, I completley believe the way you write the characters and this story just blew my socks off. Brilliant stuff. (I'm going back to read Starsky and Hutch later :-) ) |
| Shinigami061 2007-06-03 ch 12, | abuseThis was such an amazing story. The depth of characterization in Sam, Dean, Missouri, even Linda, were all wonderful. And I love how Sam acts before he regains his memories - he likes the simple life that he's living, but still feels that urge to protect and defend the people he cares about. Wonderful, wonderful story!! Keep up the great work :) Shinigami06 |