This story is very good !

Hey there! My name is Lauren. I hope you're doing well. I just read your CSI story about Emily and Lindsay and I really liked it! Emily is so cute! I can't wait to read the sequel! What is it called?
I'm def putting this story on my favorites list!
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Lauren

Hey there! Lauren here. I hope you're doing well. i just read the first eight chatpers of your CSI story about Emily and Lindsay and Ava. It was great so far! i Really liked it! I Can't wait for more! You're anamazing writer and I feel like I'm right there with the characters in the same situation they are. You're a very descriptive writer. I can see everything in my mind's eye! If you want to talk on MSN Messenge,r feel free to add me to your contact list. You can find my screen name on my profile here.
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Lauren

I really enjoy this story and can't wait for you to update

ohh...i LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this story!

aw a great story! and a great ending chapter! really looking forward to a sequel!

hey i loved the story it was awsome...ne way loved it.

Aw that was the perfect ending to the perfect story. I can't wait for the sequel.

Nice ending! I look forward to the next one!

Yup...Emily's looking to be a normal four year old.

Cute! Ava called Nick daddy and Sara momma!

great chapter! nice to see some emily and Gil time! Update soon!

Aww great chapter. I loved Ava calling Nick and Sara daddy and mommy. I really liked how Gil seemed to handle Emily. Great job, I look forward to more soon.

I'm glad Emily is settling. If she had kept it up she would have been too good to be true.

Glad that Emily is getting better! Hope its all good soon. I want to go to Disney Land mayne! Update soon!

*claps hands* what happened to the stalker person... i think on the plane or something hey would see him. that'd be a good twist. yes, i need a life. i know. anyway great chapter.