 Mwhahahaha18 2009-10-03 . chapter 14I really hope you come back to this story...its pretty interesting and I definatly want to read more of it. |
 Mortimier 2009-08-06 . chapter 3okay not to sound critical but - SLOW DOWN and think about the plot, logic and so on of the story and the canons and get spelling right.
you don't just meet someone because they send you nearly blank letter or agree without proper introduction or sit around and moan about some lost people endlessly.
Also in teh books it is CLEARLY stated that wizarding folk are a minority, keep to themselves. that SGC would have even one working there is stretch but TWELVE?
really stop rushing. this could be an interesting story if you took time and put things into logical perspective and stayed true ( as much as possible ) to the canon. |
 Jfitzgerald 2009-05-16 . chapter 14Please update again soon. Thanks. |
 Olaf74 2009-01-11 . chapter 5I'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible. |
 nxkris 2008-08-27 . chapter 14great chapter I like the ancient powers as well as super enemy update soon. |
 rlshort 2008-08-27 . chapter 14Love the sory so far and hope to read more soon. |
 goldenspecs 2008-08-26 . chapter 14Great story |
 Olaf74 2008-08-26 . chapter 14ITS BACK ITS BACK ITS BACK!
*jumps up and Down*
*gives the Author a very Big Cake* |
 Dark Yellow Dino 2008-01-02 . chapter 13i really like this story keep going or else! |
 Olaf74 2008-01-01 . chapter 13Bloody Hell. How have they gone to a gate? |
 Bobboky 2007-12-31 . chapter 13nice |
 Bobboky 2007-08-09 . chapter 12cool |
 JVTazz 2007-08-09 . chapter 12interesting story keep it up :) |
 bandgsecurtiyaw 2007-07-08 . chapter 12Awesome work. |
 Olaf74 2007-07-08 . chapter 12Brilliant. Absolutely Brilliant. Please continue it very soon. |