AWESOME!! I am off 2 the next chppy

...yay?

URGH. I'm dying to know who Naruto's previous love was!
PLZ reveal it soon! This story is very fanastic and realistic and amazing. Updatez!

dont redo, youre doing great. Now include more chapters and maybe do some chapters where Gaara tries to get intimate with Naruto and Sasuke there to stop it or something like that. Just dont do any cliches.

Hey... Um, I was wondering if this were to ever be updated again?

so when are u going to continue this story? it was really good
i hate stories incompleted!

Aw man! I was SO in luv with this story! T-T

i love the story so far

i really like the way you have written the story out with different pov from the characters. i hope you can continue writing it. aw sasuke likes naru-chan!! hehehe aw so does gaara. i'm not a big fan of nejigaar though, they both seem to seme, i perfer either of them to be with naruto. update soon! ^-^

-freezes- WTF DID YOU JUST SAY? HOW DARE YOU MAKE ME WAIT LONGER! -hugs story- MY PRECIOUS!

YB: -holding SCC back from strangling Cheshire- Calm down, SCC! It's only a story! And it's being redone!

SCC: I HATE WAITING!

Sasori: Finally someone gets it.

SCC: I ALSO HATE PUPPETS!

Deidera: IN YOUR FACE, UN!

Sasori: Shut up...

You gotta love author's notes... XD Anyway, I gotta read more! NEXT CHAPPY!

SCC: You mean SasUKE is gonna be seme? -sad-

YB: Stop faking it, SCC. Tell everyone how you REALLY feel about this.

SCC: Well... -loses sad tone- YA-cough-A-hack-A-uck-A-URK! -faints-

YB: I knew that would happen... -.-'

hey,
great story
cant wait to read the next chapter
so keep on writing
luv the story
xx

ok kakashi runs through the house naked! that ** hilarious! Im reviewing cause of that

it was really yummy hehe, cant wait to see more up