This is probably the most beautiful thing I've ever read, so sad it's probably the only fanfiction ever to actually bring genuine tears, you have so much skill...I'd kill to be able to write this beautifully. So I guess what I'm trying to say is that it's amazing. You're amazing.

I'm a pretty staunch supporter of the WHY? question so I'll throw it in here: why is Luke dying? In other words, what was the leadup to this situation?

This was very beautiful/sad/well-written. Thumbs up :)

Nice one. I like the way you did the little flashbacks to Luke's life. Would have been nice to know what happened to him, though!

Oh, this is sad. :( But beautiful.

I've read this about six times in the past 3 days. I keep comming back to it.

A great story. Very good.

Loved the story, very introspective. Short, to the point and interesting :)

Wah! Sob!

Well written.

How amazingly touching.

And sad.

And bittersweet.

And beautiful.

It was so enchanting.

I loved it.

Oh now that's just cruel. Beautifully written, which is what I think makes it cruel, I think I love it. :(

Obaona, why do you insist in making me cry? I can't even be mad at you since you do write it so well.

That was so sad but beautifully written!

Great job.

JL

Oh my, your style is so simple, yet its just beautiful. Great job!

Wow. That was really scary. It's just so real.

You have me in tears with this one. Well done.

Wow-that was beautifully done. My hat goes off to you. An artistic, skillful piece, one of the best I've seen recently.