Cute, cute story. Loved its quirkiness!

you do great law and order: ci fic's, are you going to try a chaptered one PLZ! I'll be waiting if you do.

Hey there great job!!

I'm not sure who eats 8 radishes, but I think it's one of those mysteries of life. And between Bobby and Alex, I don't really know the meaning of mundane anymore ;)

Some one who really enjoys salads...in mass quantities? I like it! I could totally see him doing that!

I liked it. You should do more.

LMAO Absolutely adorable. I love it. Great work, and I find nothing wrong with putting any of the great CI characters in mundane situations. And I agree. Eight is a little much. LOL And I LOVE him picking up one of the leaflets for Alex. LOL

I like to see Bobby in mundane situations, he is unusual enough to make them a step above mundane. Also, as far as radishes, I eat them like candy so eight may not be enough. $2.00 for eight radishes is too much for me, but maybe it's good for NY. deliriousdancer