Reviews for A Beautiful Lie

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littlewhitelie91 2007-01-17 ch 16,	abuseoh a jimmy and emma plot interesting but as much as i love them i'd rather have a cremma story
Jessica 2007-01-16 ch 16, anon.	abuseDespite Craig's general jerkiness, I still hope deep down this is a Cremma since it's obviously not a Semma. Jimmy and Emma is too odd, now Jimmy and Ellie...just a thought. Anyways, love the story! Update soon!
flowersinthespringtime 2006-12-19 ch 14,	abuseoh. i like this! emmy! i llove it!
IHL 2006-12-19 ch 14, anon.	abuseWoah--i kinda saw this coming, but didn't think you'd do it. I really like where this is going, i only wish you'd put more jimmy (if you want) or craig POV's...just a thought --i heart logan
Suzzy20 2006-12-19 ch 14,	abuseI totally love it, could you please continue...hopefully Craig will wisen up, and just got for it and stop being afraid!
funnechick 2006-12-18 ch 14,	abuseno flames from me...if Emma really likes Jimmy, I'm all for it! And Jimmy seems to genuinely care for Emma and that whole moving a strand of her hair thing was really sweet and cute. And of course them going out WILL make Craig jealous, though I'm glad that wasn't in Emma's thoughts when she agreed to go out with Jimmy. (I'm not over Cremma, but I have a thing for AU couples and to me, Jimmy & Emma is more AU than Craig & Emma) Anyways, I'm glad you updated and I hope the next chapter is coming soon!
Neviegirl 2006-12-18 ch 14,	abuseoohh very nice i wonder what craig will do. but i think i know please keep gin.
Stand In Girl 2006-11-06 ch 13,	abuse**. Make out with the girl who means nothing but can't even give Emma a peck on the lips. Typical! Guys are so very stupid. Awesome chapter. It amazes me how you don't write a lot of filler stuff - meaning paragraphs or discriptive sentences - and yet you can convey the emotions perfectly. Most authors have a hard time with that. Great job!
yarii19 2006-11-06 ch 13,	abuseCRAIG!! u stupid lil piece of...CRAP! Next time dont be such an idiot! ok?! hehe LOVED IT!
Suzzy20 2006-11-06 ch 13, anon.	abuseI totally loved it, but I totally wished they kissed.
funnechick 2006-11-06 ch 13,	abuseMan! Dangit! Whhy?! Why is Craig so stupid?! How could he go make out with Ashley but can't even give one tiny kiss to Emma, a girl he "supposedly" likes?! As you may be able to tell...I am pretty peeved at Craig for his stupidness! But I really did love how Emma handled everything, she was pretty mature and didn't say or do anything stupid, but I have a feeling, if Emma would have been just a bit more confident, she would've kissed Craig herself...I still can't believe Craig is such a coward! Ugh! Anyways, I can't wait for the next chapter and no pressure or anything, but I really hope their first kiss happens in the next post...PLEASE!
yarii19 2006-11-05 ch 12,	abuseew craig ns ashley r so...icky! i love this story alot! but ashley is a total 'Biotch' as ellie put it! hehe cool! non-Flame:"The most emo club in the world. Just walking in the door makes me want to slash my wrists."...at first i thought these words were pretty umm offensive but i had to giggle at it too! AWSOME!!
modernxxmyth 2006-11-05 ch 1,	abuse30 Seconds to Mars is AMAZING. Nicely chosen title. Was It a Dream chap. title as well. Props.
fadedexistence 2006-11-05 ch 12,	abusecries Why would you do that, Why? Why? I thought that Craig liked Emma!! Grr.. >.< Update soon. :P
funnechick 2006-11-05 ch 12,	abuseOk...one snap from Emma and Craig decides to be all...ugh...a jerk?! I mean, c'mon, you'd think it'd take more than that to throw away all the progress him and Emma were making to just make out with Ashley when he knows he doesn't even like her like that...and now she's going to think they'll be together, well they better not be! That'll make me so mad! But I wonder what a drunk Emma is going to do now that she's found them making out...will she break down and start crying, will she become an angry drunk, will she try to get home by herself...drunk...I'm not sure what I'm hoping, maybe that Jimmy takes her home and that there's no more drama for the night. Oh, and that Craig feels majorly bad for what he did and finds some way to make it up to her. UPDATE SOON!

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