I haven't even read Naruto in over a year but I found myself today just reading this fic again, after many years, and I still love it. I love your Rin, so real and so sad. And I think Kakashi would very muh think like that. Thanks for this 3

I believe that 13 is a very special number.

I was listening to Sadness and Sorrow when I read this. I cried for Rin-chan and Kashi-kun. I also cried for Obito-san. Please write more stories like this, this one was the best KakashiRin fic I 've read in a while now. Thank you for this opportunity to express my opinions. Good bye,

Meishra Uzamaki of the Village Hidden in the Leaves.

Aw. That was so angsty and sad. I think Kakashi's idea of heaven is adorable; your portrayal of Team 13 is great; you show their relationships very well. These two lines were perfect:

'White is for her soul and Kakashi doesn’t want to know what red is for.'

...That's just...T.T

And also:

'Rin whispers underneath the underneath, Kakashi and smiles her humble sweet smile and the genuis Copy-nin is speechless.'

I just loved that moment. So still.

Thank you for favoriting my story, also. _

I think this was a really great story...you did a really good job! It made me tear up at the end

It's good, a bit sudden what with all the leaping around. I suggest you find a way to make it a bit smoother, you know? Flowing... that's what my English teacher tells me. She also tells me I'm a strong writer. *Shurgs* Which is good I suppose. But anyway, yes, think flowing, think smooth, think... water. Frosting. Um... snakes. Polished wood.

Maybe put in some flashbacks? That is, if you plan on redoing it at all. Try it out, ne?