That is just slightly less depressing than the actual game, but it was still really really good. I liked it a lot, good job. But the end of that game still gets me. *is sad now*

You have no idea how happy this fic made me. After beating the game I WAS SO FRICKIN' **! All that crap for nothing! So I came to fanfiction to read alternate stories about it. These are one of them, and I applaud you on this fic. Congrats!

I like! Where's Agro? (tear) haha. Good story.