Stop flaiming my stories you idiot nobody gives a damn and everybody hates you, I mean i had one spelling error, ONE and i changed it not to mention it said it was yaoi and if you are going to be a homophobe go some where else.

Oh and by the way you made my little sister cancel her profile and stories, she was crying all day, so please stop being a complete bully and if you can't leave, i don't know if you doing this to get people to hate you or if you are just a dumb troll but your stories suck.

Why don't you just delete yourself? cunt

This was so heartwarming. Thank you gracefully for blessing us with this fic. 10/10. Bazinga.

Grammatical Errors:

1) "Go, mew - Missed a quotation mark, along with an ending punctuation mark.

2) I bet you are really surprised to here that. - You used 'here' instead of 'hear'.

3) I send out mew, it sits there and gets hammered until I take pity on it and recall it. - A comma

between 'mew' and 'it' does not work. You have to use either a semi colon or a conjuction. 'I send out

mew' is a independent clause and a comma following it indicates a run-on sentence.

4) "Mew" - This requires an ending punctuation mark. This happens ELEVEN TIMES in the entire story.

5) white/pink - This annoys me.

6) Mew's white/pink fur is now more red then anything. - You used 'then' instead of 'than'.

7)It could kill it's attackers - You use 'it's' instead of 'its'.

8)That beedrill which is attacking is even weak against psi!-

There should be a comma between 'beedrill' and 'which' and a comma between 'attacking' and 'is'. This is a parenthetical expression and requires commas or else it's a run-on sentence. And what is a 'psi'?

9) Still, this foolish! - Besides the fact that it is a fragment, it also doesn't explain what the 'this' is

referring to.

10) I guess it would rather die then fight. – You used ‘then’ instead of ‘than’, again.

11)It takes two to be pacifists, it takes one to fight. - A comma cannot be used between 'pacifists' and 'it'. Look back at #3.

12) "Beedrill, return!" the trainer looks at me "This isn't a battle. Beedrill is killing your pokemon and it isn't even trying to fight back." - If the sentence ends at 'return!', 'the' should me capitalized. There should be a period after 'me'.

13) The sun glints on it's collar. - You used 'it's' instead of 'its'.

14) Mew." Misery - 'Misery' requires an ending punctuation mark.

15) "Mew" you sound stunned - 'Mew' requires an ending punctuation mark as shown in #4. The 'y' in 'you' needs to capitalized. 'Stunned' needs an ending punctuation mark.

Besides the fact that you sound like you have never walked into an English class in you're life, I have to say this story is rather boring and pointless. It was repetitive and that you haven't tried hard writing this.

very good story! i LOVE Mew and Mew2! This is my first pokemon fanfic i have read and i love it!

You used the wrong "here" in the author's note. You meant "hear."

You also have "it's" instead of "its."

You also forgot to end a lot of sentences with periods.

I realize this is your older work, but you could still edit the more obvious flaws in it.

Woooooooooooooooooooow... This has great potential to be continued as a one-shot or even an entire story line!

And that Rocket will never be seen again.

Poor Mew. Poor nameless Rocket. I do find that strange; Mew doesn't like to fight, but she fights just fine in the game, huh? Very good, anyway.

Really nice.

Congrats to this story! It's the only one of yours that didn't leave me feeling depressed.

I'm glad the Rocket member let Mew go, though he's going to pay for it, Giovanni will probably make sure of that.

He/she is probably a whole new person now that Mew's forgiven them, but I'm still mad at them for the Pidgey "incident".

Yep. It's official. Your definitely one of my favorite authors now! I felt so sorry for Mew... whoever caught Mew, I don't hate or like him/her. Evil, yet whoever it was set Mew free, so I can't decided. I have no clue what the Giovanni may do to him/her now, but I have a feeling it's not going to be good... Anyway, nice fic!

I liked the ending! Mew's finally free.. but poor rocket member...

Aw... Mew is my favorite pokemon. I can relate to it. You should do more like this.

Apparently, no one seems to like that Rocket member, even though he suffered a change of heart and reluctantly released Mew back to her (I'll pretend Mew's a she) beloved freedom. O_o;. Oh well, I like the Rocket member and his/her confusion. :D

The problem with most people is that they think that animals and/or pokemon can't think for themselves. Why? Because they don't SPEAK like us. That's bull. Honestly... Evil people like Team Rocket are just that much worse.

Aw. i love Mew. Team Rocket is stupid, the jack@$$es.