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Tragic warrior
2008-08-09 . chapter 1
Being indifferent to one's feelings is one of the worst thing anyone could do. May Kim spend the rest of her days realizing how much damage she could have avoided if she only had cared for her "best friend". Good one-shot.
Krillin Fan
2007-05-05 . chapter 1
Okay, first and foremost, I usually don't read these. I'm a pretyy hardcore DBZ fan. However, I recently went through some old tapes of the show I had, statred watching it on the T.V. again, and I couldn't help but wonder.

When I write, I try to focus in the realm of realism. Even the superhero type has weaknesses of emotion. And Ron was always an enigma to me. How he could always stay so, well, Ron in spite of the way he was treated. And frankly, had it not been for a certain big plot twist, I really think that this would have happened to him eventually. I knoe I went through similar problems at school, and more than once found myself debating that very decision. As a result, this really spoke to me.

Congratulations, even if this was a depressing A/U. Keep up the good work.
CastaS
2006-12-02 . chapter 1
great story, i enjoyed reading it.
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