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| Shani8 2006-11-21 ch 1,  | abuseAw...another W/E gem from you, and I love, love, love it! :) Thanks so much for writing and sharing. ~Shaliza :) _ "Live well, laugh often, love much!" |
| hannah 2006-08-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseplease please please do more on will and elizabeth! i don't really like to read stories aboot elizabeth and jack |
| Rose Angelz 2006-07-28 ch 1, | abuseAww...this was really cute! Please write more! |
| Attiqah Gensui 2006-07-18 ch 1, | abuseI can just imagine it in the movie, perfect and it fits. |
| Smithy 2006-07-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseDid you do this because Orlando Bloom is such a big football {soccer} fan? After he and Robin Roberts discussed the movie 'Dead Man's Chest', she mentioned the world cup and he said 'England' three times |
| chef13 2006-07-15 ch 1, | abusei liked this one a lot. ^_^ it showed us a little more insight into the friendship of Elizabeth and Will. very good and they were very sweet. one thing that confused me while i was reading it was this bit: "Will... I'm so sorry..." The blacksmith shook his head, "It's not your fault, Miss Swann." he spoke, his eyes glued to the ship that was drifting away into the darkness. i think you should have put the fact that the ship was leaving BEFORE Elizabeth said she was sorry. when i read it, i didn't know what she was sorry for, and it seemed not to make any sense until i read the next line. that was just a little oddly placed; nothing to be ashamed of. ^_^ anyways, good story. i look forward to more like this. ^_^ Chef13 |
| williz 2006-07-10 ch 1, | abuseYay for Will/Elizabeth! This was excellent! I am such a Will/Elizabeth fan and now I'm a you fan because everything you said up there, was the coolest thing ever. Jack/Elizabeth gives me a nauseating feeling in my stomach, to tell you the truth. And I don't like slash, though it doesn't nauseate me, as does Jack/Elizabeth. So you are AWESOME! Us two, we'll keep the Will/Elizabeth alive. Thanks so much! This was a great one shot! I enjoyed the football. Best sport ever. Praise Italia! Woot! -williz |
| Sallia 2006-07-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like the story, I thought it was adorable. =) The Will part as the ship sails away seems a bit fragmented, but other than that, you have it down. ^_^ You can set the scene pretty well. LOVE YA WOMAN! |
| lateBloomer04 2006-07-09 ch 1, | abuseAwesome! Love the history in this. It wants me to watch Will play soccer :D With his shirt off... |